A thing that I wrote

Discussion in 'Writing and Prose' started by Renven, Jul 14, 2017.

  1. Renven

    Renven Member

    None of my real-life friends are into reading or writing, or just don't have the time, so over the course of the year that I wrote these 12 pages, I only got little snippets of critique. IDK, just nobody seems interested, or nobody has time. I just say that kuz i had a hard day and this is one area i'd love to improve in, but nobody seems to be able to help. link: docs.google.com: afterwards 1
     
  2. reptile logic

    reptile logic An imposter among aliens.

    Rough draft, I assume. I took a look and, since you offered it up in that format, I played at being an editor through the first few pages. I'll re-read it later today just for content and send you a pm. Got to get back to work.
     
  3. reptile logic

    reptile logic An imposter among aliens.

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