Creating a VN, how's it look?

Discussion in 'Furry Comics, Books & Graphic Novels' started by Sogreth, Feb 2, 2017.

  1. Sogreth

    Sogreth Local Cuddle Bear and Wannabe Writer

    ***UPDATED***​

    Chapter Four is done! (Text only)
    -PC and Mac versions available

    Before you start!
    I'm still learning Ren'py, so please BEAR (lol) with me. I would suggest turning the volume down on Music and Sounds once you open up the VN. I'm still trying to get the hang of that, so some of the sounds and music might be pretty loud.

    **File is too big to upload here, so I uploaded it to my Patreon**
    Sogreth is creating Hidden World | Patreon
    (Don't worry, you don't need to become a Patron. It's free access to anyone.)

    p.s. If you have any issues with it, or if you notice any grammar errors or bugs, just let me know I'll see if I can fix them! Also open to any criticism!

    Quick rundown:
    It's a Fantasy/Action/Adventure Visual Novel, with a growing romance between the main character, Miles and a beastman. A love that was never meant to happen, but could end up changing the fate of the entire world. (It's SFW, and I intend to keep it that way.)

    It kind of starts off slow but, Miles accidentally stumbles upon this hidden world of Beastmen. In this world, it's filled with many dangers, like poisonous plants, and dark spirits that have the ability to possess wildlife and beastmen alike, causing them to go feral.

    Miles goes on a journey with two other beastmen, trying to find out where these spirits came from, and to find a way to stop them. They find that this world holds more secrets than they could ever imagine.
     
    Last edited: Feb 25, 2017
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  2. Sarachaga

    Sarachaga You gain Brouzouf

    Well, I'm interested, definitely waiting to see more of this!
     
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  3. Sogreth

    Sogreth Local Cuddle Bear and Wannabe Writer

    Awesome! I've been slowly working on it whenever I have time. My biggest issue is that I can't draw! So other than backgrounds, I don't really have any images for my characters yet.
     
  4. Sogreth

    Sogreth Local Cuddle Bear and Wannabe Writer

    Got chapter one done!

    Just going to do some minor changes and fix a few things, and I'll post it here!
     
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  5. Sogreth

    Sogreth Local Cuddle Bear and Wannabe Writer

    Updated my OP. Link to the VN is there.
     
  6. Sergei Sóhomo

    Sergei Sóhomo Well-Known Member

    I dunno, I've had bad intances with furry VNs.


    Fucking Major Minor was quite possibly the worst one I've seen
     
  7. Sogreth

    Sogreth Local Cuddle Bear and Wannabe Writer

    Was it really that bad? I looked into it before, I've only heard bad things about it. It looks really well made though.
     
  8. Sergei Sóhomo

    Sergei Sóhomo Well-Known Member

    Art was alright but it was nothing more than edgy, self-insert furbait
     
  9. Sarachaga

    Sarachaga You gain Brouzouf

    Argh it's on pc. I damn you filthy mac of mine!
    I'm sorry I'm not gonna be able to try it for a while then, I have to reinstall Wine and so on...
     
  10. Sogreth

    Sogreth Local Cuddle Bear and Wannabe Writer

    I can upload a mac version I think. Give me a few minutes, I'll see if I can.
     
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  11. Sarachaga

    Sarachaga You gain Brouzouf

    Thanks! That'd be very nice!
     
  12. Sogreth

    Sogreth Local Cuddle Bear and Wannabe Writer

    It should be up now!
     
  13. Sarachaga

    Sarachaga You gain Brouzouf

    I'm finished. Waiting for the next part :p
     
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  14. Sogreth

    Sogreth Local Cuddle Bear and Wannabe Writer

    Updated OP! Chapter Two is done!

    Hope you like it!
     
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  15. Sogreth

    Sogreth Local Cuddle Bear and Wannabe Writer

    Just finished uploading Chapter Three!
     
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  16. Sogreth

    Sogreth Local Cuddle Bear and Wannabe Writer

    Chapter Four and about 1/4 of Chapter Five is up now!
     
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  17. Sarachaga

    Sarachaga You gain Brouzouf

    Good to hear! Keep it up ^^
     
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