[Critique Request] Finally Free

Discussion in 'Tutorials and Critiques' started by KitSly, Oct 31, 2016.

  1. KitSly

    KitSly Single and lonely

    This is the script for a babyfur/diaperfur story that popped into my head after binge reading BabyStar's comic Shine. I have never written anything like this, so when the idea popped into my head, I thought I would give it a shot. It was actually quite fun.

    I am looking for critiques and ideas on how to improve it since I will post this to my FA page once it is ready.

    Please keep any feedback constructive.

    www.furaffinity.net: Finally Free - Chapter 01 by KitSly
     

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