I didn't see any sub-forums or threads for the purpose of critiquing writing, so I was wondering if anybody would like to critique/edit some smut for me? I haven't written fiction in a long time, so I'm pretty rusty. It's pretty vanilla stuff so far, but it contains sort of an odd species pairing of a meerkat and a lobster 'taur. I'm working on filling in other bits of a continuing story, so these are just shorts lacking some unimportant information. 1. www.furaffinity.net: At The Docks by Anodracs G-rated 2. www.furaffinity.net: The date by Anodracs Hetero Erotica, first part unfinished 3. www.furaffinity.net: The swimming lesson by Anodracs Hetero Erotica Also, (and I'm asking this in complete seriousness), does anyone know of any online databases of synonyms for various smutty words? Trying to use the same three or four slang words for genitalia without using unappealing technical or medical-sounding phrases gets kind of boring.