First Erotic Shifter Story

Discussion in 'Tutorials & Critiques' started by Arthur Thomas Rey, Aug 16, 2016.

  1. Arthur Thomas Rey

    Arthur Thomas Rey New Member

    Title: Alder Falls: Book One - Chapter I

    The story is gay shapeshifter erotic fiction. Main character starts as human and realizes that his family has a past. Heavy fantasy elements.

    Adult Content: Explicit scenes of sex.

    Would like to be critiqued on pacing, tone, and if I have effectively piqued your curiosity.

    www.furaffinity.net: Alder Falls: Book One, Chapter I by ArthurThomasRey
     
  2. KittenAdmin

    KittenAdmin Sup nerds

    I'll need to check this out when I'm not about to pass out. Looks interesting!
     
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