First "Macro" Story

Discussion in 'Tutorials and Critiques' started by 01t1mer0nly, Feb 13, 2017.

  1. 01t1mer0nly

    01t1mer0nly New Member

    Still really don't know if this falls under the macro genre, given the samples of what I've read within it so far, but I'll just put this up here for critique.

    Link to story: www.furaffinity.net: An Unplanned Weekend by 01t1mer0nly
    Quick Summary: White-collar donkey goes on his weekly night out town, but things took a sudden change once he went to his usual bar.
    Points to critique: Pretty standard ones like grammar and punctuation, structure and pacing, dialogue and exposition, balance of showing and telling, etc.
     

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