Hey, I started writing again!

Discussion in 'Tutorials & Critiques' started by Jarren, Oct 23, 2016.

  1. Jarren

    Jarren What doesn't kill me makes me stranger.

    Well, after spending nearly a year devoting all my writing energy to a novel (which is currently entering its final stages of editing! Yay.) I've started writing things for sharing with the fandom. This first piece is set in the same world as my novel, and the events occur concurrently with the main story, I figured it would be nice to play with the idea of what was going on elsewhere without the other characters present.
    I'd like a little bit of feedback on the style and the pacing for this one (general opinion is also welcome). Do things progress too slowly? Does it not seem engaging? Am I being a little too wordy in how I'm writing? Let me know!
    www.furaffinity.net: The Roads of Avalon: Part-1 by Jarren_Ironclaw
     

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