Lucario and the Aftermath

Discussion in 'Tutorials and Critiques' started by MAGIKzMushroom, Apr 16, 2016.


what did you think of my story?

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  1. MAGIKzMushroom

    MAGIKzMushroom Active Member

  2. reptile logic

    reptile logic An imposter among aliens.

    Prologue: Still feels like a rough draft, and not enough story to understand where you are going with it.

    Chapter 1: Could not access this submission.

    That's all I can give you. I'm certainly no expert on offering critiques.

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