Mature Short Story

Discussion in 'Tutorials and Critiques' started by Z-Mizz, Apr 3, 2016.

  1. Z-Mizz

    Z-Mizz Monkey Magic c(^o^)ɔ

    Yo! I recently submitted my first furry themed short story to FA.

    It's been a while since I've written anything at all, so I would really appreciate any comments.

    www.furaffinity.net: Pillow Talk by Z-Mizz

    Thanks! c(^o^)ɔ
     
  2. Moondoggy

    Moondoggy Moon Moon

    Oh my gosh! This was adorable and sexy! Awww so cute and yet I wish to be in their spot!
     
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  3. Z-Mizz

    Z-Mizz Monkey Magic c(^o^)ɔ

    Thanks! Maybe one day when I'm comfortable with my writing again I could do story commissions, if that's a thing <_<;. I'd definitely write one for you c(^o^)ɔ
     
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  4. Moondoggy

    Moondoggy Moon Moon

    Awww that's so nice of you! I'm actually working on one with me and another fur in it, idk if I'll post it though ^^'
     

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