Rules for the Bloc: 1.) Please post critique requests in the Critique subforum: http://forums.furaffinity.net/forums/81-Writer-s-Critique-Forum 2.) Please don't post whole works or large excerpts of works on the forums. Use the mainsite and link to it. 3.) Advertise your work using this thread: http://forums.furaffinity.net/threads/9065-Looking-for-writers Do not start a new thread. Hope those are easy to follow. Thanks for your attention.