Did some minor reworking. Though I'm still not happy with that word unrequitable at the start of the story as they feel no rage towards him but he does towards them. It is rage that he cannot obtain a satisfactory goal of satisfying. A fantasy story of unknown length in which a dragon for his crimes and behavior, is sentenced to become a 'lesser being' and must perform acts of kindness, bravery, altruism etc. in order to get his full draconic self back. www.furaffinity.net: Uavik pt 1ofmany by I.Hykok How's the flow, How well does it read? How are the Characters? Spelling/punctuation/syntax oversights? Critiques in general?