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  1. Baalf

    Is making my rough draft public a good idea?

    What do you mean by revising your draft as much as possible?
  2. Baalf

    18 Pages worth of dialogue is kind of a lot. It may not seem a lot for a novel, but a forum it...

    18 Pages worth of dialogue is kind of a lot. It may not seem a lot for a novel, but a forum it is quite a lot. I'm probably going to end up going in blind.
  3. Baalf

    Remember? You fought a big giant Mammoth named Mambo.

    Remember? You fought a big giant Mammoth named Mambo.
  4. Baalf

    Can Mambo join your party? I don't know where to put him in, but it sounds kind of relevant.

    Can Mambo join your party? I don't know where to put him in, but it sounds kind of relevant.
  5. Baalf

    Can't change it, so I just removed it. To be honest, I am a bit personal about that kind of...

    Can't change it, so I just removed it. To be honest, I am a bit personal about that kind of information.
  6. Baalf

    Is making my rough draft public a good idea?

    That is just what I have heard. It's not that I don't trust my friends or anything.
  7. Baalf

    Is making my rough draft public a good idea?

    Yes, but I've heard that you are not supposed to show it to friends oh, because they might give you some biased feedback.
  8. Baalf

    Is making my rough draft public a good idea?

    It's nice to get a different opinion on the dream sequence. Some people I have shown that to weren't very fond of the dream sequence. That being said, it might help to get some more opinions. From my personal experience, people strongly seem to dislike being told what the species of their...
  9. Baalf

    Is making my rough draft public a good idea?

    1st draft of Chapter 1 https://www.furaffinity.net/view/28795782/ 2nd draft of Chapter 1 https://www.furaffinity.net/view/39184258/
  10. Baalf

    Is making my rough draft public a good idea?

    Right now, I have just been struggling with second-guessing and wanting to go back and change stuff in the current draft that I'm writing. I couldn't get anyone to read my first draft, or at least stick through it, although I got some decent advice. Some person on another Forum suggested making...
  11. Baalf

    Is Balan Wonderland the next Mighty No.9/Yooka-Laylee?

    From what I know, it's kind of a pseudo spiritual successor to the Nights franchise, or at least it might have been made by some of the same
  12. Baalf

    Is Balan Wonderland the next Mighty No.9/Yooka-Laylee?

    *sigh* because from what I have heard, it is not going so well for that game. It did not go well for the other spiritual successors I mentioned, I either. But then again, the first one I mentioned had some pretty decent spin-offs, in the second one had a decent sequel. Maybe something good will...
  13. Baalf

    Oops. I still have my birthday set incorrectly.

    Oops. I still have my birthday set incorrectly.
  14. Baalf

    Is my story becoming too dark?

    the first chapter of both of my rough drafts are on my furaffinity page, and I am still looking for beta readers for my first draft. I don't read a lot of books that are in my Target demographic. I guess you could say the Harry Potter books, but I don't know about quite that far. I feel like...
  15. Baalf

    Is my story becoming too dark?

    I'm starting to think, yeah, it's not so much a bad thing to have villains that kill their targets, but I feel like it's something that should happen EVENTUALLY, not the first book. the current situation I have right now is that Ricky had just watched Maya get shot by a tranquilizer and hauled...
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