Thank you for responding! I'm still experimenting so I'm not surprised there are discrepancies. I have a lot of trouble making the lineart look natural and fluid so I guess that's why it looks traced? I don't know how to give it that natural motion and variation like I see in other's art... I...
I thought he was a yellow jacket ...I now see he was supposed to be a robber fly. I didn't even know those existed; robber fly makes much more sense looking at the original. My apologies for the mess up ^^;
I'm looking for honest critiques and opinions on my art. No need to sugarcoat anything; you can be harsh.
Any advice would really be appreciated!
This is everything I've done so far: (FA page if seeing them in bigger sizes helps critique)