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  1. Gwayne

    Critique: Tf story, Looking for Input

    Maybe instead: “I didn’t know Grandpa very well, even though I would visit every summer. Still, I knew he loved that statue at the very least. (Shorter passage that gives pretty much all the same information as the original.) After just a few minutes of digging the statue came loose...
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    Critique: Tf story, Looking for Input

    Thanks for the reply 1) Could you maybe point to specific passages that you found stiff or wordy? 2) I tend to structure the story so the actual tf is the climax after that I tend to try wrapping things up. Perhaps instead I should write a story where the tf happens by the end of act 1 and the...
  3. Gwayne

    Critique: Tf story, Looking for Input

    www.furaffinity.net: River Child by Bec66 I’d like some more feedback on my work and if possible I’d like to know where I could find a writing tutor.
  4. Gwayne

    Looking for a comic about Transformation

    @reptile logic I might check it out, thanks. I should’ve said this earlier but books are also fine by me.
  5. Gwayne

    Looking for a comic about Transformation

    I’ve been interested in transformation for years. While I find the act of tfing to be interesting there aren’t many works, at least not many I’ve seen, that really focus on the after effects of the transformation. So can anyone suggest to me a comic along those lines or at least one about TF’s.
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    Looking to break into the community and start writing what I want.

    Looking to break into the community and start writing what I want.
  7. Gwayne

    Critique: Posted my first TF story

    This is the first story I’ve ever posted on FA. I’d like some criticism. The story in Question: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/32987388/
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