“I didn’t know Grandpa very well, even though I would visit every summer. Still, I knew he loved that statue at the very least. (Shorter passage that gives pretty much all the same information as the original.)
After just a few minutes of digging the statue came loose...
Thanks for the reply
1) Could you maybe point to specific passages that you found stiff or wordy?
2) I tend to structure the story so the actual tf is the climax after that I tend to try wrapping things up. Perhaps instead I should write a story where the tf happens by the end of act 1 and the...
I’ve been interested in transformation for years. While I find the act of tfing to be interesting there aren’t many works, at least not many I’ve seen, that really focus on the after effects of the transformation. So can anyone suggest to me a comic along those lines or at least one about TF’s.