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    Looking for critiques on my Novel

    Well thank you for that. And yes, i am still writing, but i have been extremely busy with my first quarter of college and have had minimal time for outside writing. I have certainly considered taking courses in one or more of the subjects you mentioned, but i want to finish my crap classes...
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    Master Chief Vs. Samus.

    Hmm. Agreed. Like i said i heave not seen the newest Metroid so i have no input on that subjest.
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    Looking for critiques on my Novel

    OK thats it! im so deleting the "runner" observation. had a lot of comments on it and your comment was the clincher... no M/M romance in this story, sorry to disappoint any potential readers out there. Anywho i may or may not post the revised version on FA but i will make the changes on my...
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    Looking for critiques on my Novel

    Thats alright about the delay. Im just glad someone is actually commenting :) Anyway yes i see what you mean and now that i notice it i find it interesting. I had wanted to create vivid imagery in the first section anyway. I wanted to make it feel real, and like he was in a hurry. Im...
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    Looking for critiques on my Novel

    Not any reason in particular. i never even really noticed it before to tell you the truth. just a coinsidence i guess, most of those words just fit best i thought. Is it a bad thing? does it make it annoying? Harder to read? or are you just pointing something out? If you find it to be a negative...
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    Looking for critiques on my Novel

    indeed. i will take your comments into my thinking. i can definately tell a deifference between the two forms you displayed. please keep reading and i hope you find it improves, if not ill have to review the chapters again.
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    Looking for critiques on my Novel

    well, that was long soo i guess ill start at your first point. 1. yes i do play a lot of RPG's and indeed that was a major inspiration in my writing. I dont watch anime though. 2. with the whole "freeze frame" thing. while i agree that i may need to shorten the descriptions, i will say...
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    So I was in Best Buy, and Lair was on the Demo PS3. . .

    Holy crap! thats outrageous! glad i dont live there lol (not that i would ever buy a sony product in the first place)
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    So I was in Best Buy, and Lair was on the Demo PS3. . .

    I feel that i must also point something out that i believe is a testimate to sony's eminent downfall in the gaming world. Squarenix, the major creator of most of sony's major benchmark games, and who, for as long as they have been in existance, has been a sony exclusive, has announced that they...
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    Do you like any Video Game Characters in general?

    Heres a list of my favorte game character that i would totally like to just hang out with if they were real. Ill number my top 3. the rest are'nt in any particular order. 1. Zidane - FFIX (can you say "pick Pocket" lol) 2. Marcia - Fire Emblem PoR (friggin hilarious and friendly) 3. Rikku -...
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    The Golden Compass / The Northern LIghts

    ya sorry about that, got carried away... anywho if you haven't read the books i highly reccomend them.
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    The Golden Compass / The Northern LIghts

    ya i know what you mean.... that kind of thing just always pisses me off. if the bible beaters dont like it then they dont have to watch it for F***s sake! anyway thats my opinion... but still, it is a bit worrying.
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    Samus VS Master Chief. Who would win?

    OMG i love those comics, they're hilarious! :D
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    Master Chief Vs. Samus.

    Indeed, to each his own
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    Prophetic dreaming

    That sounds a lot like a book i am currently reading called "Blink" it describes how the unconcious mind works. usually it can make snap desisions like what you describe within miliseconds, far before our concious mind even realizes whats going on. Its very interesting and it goes into great...
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