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*drops shield* *removes gauntlets* Phew, safe. +1

Delicious. I just hope nobody sends a flood of water or something. M&M coloring dye in liquid looks really disgusting. +1 12

Yes. They should still be delicious though. I look forward to dining on cheese. +1 10

Oh also *blocks with shield* +1 10

One hour like there's a 1 hour delay between potion impact and TF, or one hour like the TF lasts 1 hour? +1 8

Quick! We must send stealthy spies to infiltrate the secret base! Me? Heavens no. Armor clanks like a really... clanky... thing. +1 8?

*contributes to the team effort* +1 4

I define thinking as brain activity. My reflexive neurons would still have to fire to say something, despite me not devoting conscious effort to it. +1 2

Touche. +1

I spoke to soon. Welcome, reinforcements! +1 0/1

Blast, I'm quite outnumbered! What a pickle. Hmm... +1 -2?

Wait. That's impossible. +1 -4

*tries to think of something to say* +1 -3

Pardon?? +1 -3

Starting a PVP round without prey present? +1 -3

I’ve only gotten anti smoking advertisements on YouTube today. I’ve never even considered smoking.

How dare you! I am neither snuggly, nor fuzzy. One could make an argument for wuzzy but I’m not exactly sure what the adjective means.

@TR273, I read “Hidden in plain sight”. General thoughts: Good in medias res beginning, good, efficient worldbuilding, good establishment of the standards of the world, good flyover of the plot till the point the reader is dropped in, good “hook”, interesting characterization. I’m intrigued...

That was sarcasm! I was trying to say that you seem to think I expect super high quality, incredibly time and labor intensive feedback, and that's really not what I was thinking. That's all I meant.

Well, I'm not expecting a video conference or anything. Just a few sentences of written feedback at your leisure when I have something to present would be really helpful!