apologies if this is in the wrong forum. i wasn't sure where to put it.
I'm not an artist and I don't commission things very often, so I wanted to get some other perspectives on a situation I've found myself in. I'm pretty irked by it, but it's entirely possible that I'm being unfair.
2. The other eye.
4. Eraser marks/ghost lines.
5. This is permanent ink so I guess he just has really long nose now.
6: Dynamic angles????
8. I bought this sketchbook to scribble my ideas in but it cost money and it's real paper so if I do draw anything...