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  1. WildKitFox

    Critique: Shading Critique and advice!!!

    Hey everyone! I've been determined to improve my art skills overall, as well as having taken my first steps in the world of digital art. The going has been fairly rough, as my drawings are still very rough. I recently tried shading one of my works, and found myself growing frustrated. I think...
  2. WildKitFox

    Critique: Critique Request on adult scene

    Hey all! I'm working hard on improving my drawing, and was hoping to get some feedback. This is my first real attempt at placing two different characters in the same scene as if they were supposed to be inhabiting the same space and all. It was much harder than I cared for it to be, and I was...
  3. WildKitFox

    Critique: Firedancer Chapter 1: Pyrrhi (NSFW)

    Hey all! This is the first chapter of a story I've been working on for a while. It's working title is Firedancer. I'm trying to get any all feedback I can so that my improve my skills as a writer, and to maybe gauge interest in the story. This is still far from the final version, and I'm...
  4. duskyblue

    Looking for betareaders for a furry action script (Violence/Swear warning)

    I've spent a while on this story (spent 3 years world building and changing up story ideas). Ever since I found out about Dan Harmon's story circle, writing has been a ton easier and I finally made a complete and cohesive draft that only took me a week to make (for the first draft). I just...
  5. WildKitFox

    Critique Request!

    Hey everyone! I'm desperately trying to improve my art skills and would love any and all advice/critique/suggestions you all may have on my work. My latest sketch is a WIP that's found here: www.furaffinity.net: Quinn WIP by WildFox373 I intend to color it eventually, but would love to here...
  6. Iflyte

    [Critique and general advice requested] The Metroid's Song (NSFW)

    Hi guys, as you can imagine, the story I've written takes place in the metroid universe and is also quite smutty, definitely NSFW and featuring a number of out of the ordinary kinks. www.furaffinity.net: The Metroid's Song by iflyte A Brief Description: The Metroid's song is a complete...
  7. mila_crepe

    Critique: First furry art!

    hello! This is my first furry art so it's just a really blank fursona sheet! I'm more used to drawing humans and was wondering if there are any tips or critiques for this which would/could help me draw furries better? :oops:
  8. D

    A summary for one little, magical fox

    (English is not my native language, I hope this wall is bearable to read regardless. Also, since there's a limit to how long you can write your thread, I put the remaining half of this summary into the first comment right beneath it.) Name: Fenja Age: 23 Sex: Female Species: Red fox with...
  9. Setokaiva

    [Critique Request] The Spider's Trial - Seducing the Healer

    As you can guess by the word 'seducing', this story is sex-focused, so anyone who finds that uncomfortable need not apply for this request. This story is a Novelized Roleplaying Log, something I've been posting a lot of lately. What that means is that it is in a play-by-play format, with the...
  10. KeesNailo

    Critique: Asking for your opinions

    Here are my galleries: My personal works gallery - Userpage of KeesNailo -- Fur Affinity [dot] net My commission gallery -Userpage of BlueButterflyStudio -- Fur Affinity [dot] net 1. What is it about my work that needs improvement and/or change? 2. What subjects would you like to see more of...
  11. Misha Bordiga Zahradník

    Critique: A rough map.

    Made this using Campaign Cartographer 3+. Looking for any feedback. www.furaffinity.net: Setting Map Draft 1 by MishaGreen
  12. A

    Critique: critique request on this mew (NSFW)

    As the title says, could i get some feedback on this piece www.furaffinity.net: mew shiny 1.5 by asdruballe i mainly seek advice on how to stand out more the character against the background and for general error i have missed P.S. i use clip studio thanks in advance
  13. R

    Critique This Red Panda Doodle

    Hiya, feel free to critique the heck out of it. Mostly I'm curious if I need to work on the proportions a little more, perhaps the floof aspect, and even watercolor techniques. But other than that, thank you, if you get the chance to critique this.
  14. MacSquiddles

    Looking for Critique [nsfw]

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  15. Boured

    [Critique Request] Promise Keeper

    This poem is rated as Mature due to it's mature subject matter that most of the younger people I've met didn't grasp. The following is the description on the post itself. A Shakespearean Sonnet I wrote in my writing/poetry class for my final project. I really like it as it allows me to express...
  16. Ichthy

    [Critique Request] What is missing?

    Warning, might not be viewable for all audiences This is a project I am working on lately and I feel like some stuff is missing but I can't quite put my finger on it. I would like some help with this before it is complete.
  17. Ichthy

    Critique Request: "A loving mother"

    The title is something I am still working on btw. "A loving Mother" is a story about a daughter and her mother. the mother was bitten by a werewolf and was infected now too. She locks herself in a room and starves herself in an attempt to die. She begs her daughter to kill her when it has been...
  18. Raptorworks

    Thoughts on my dinosaur mask technique?

    So I'd really like to start selling masks and bases with a focus on realistic/semi-realistic dinosaurs, dragons, and similar creatures, and I think I've got a construction technique that works pretty well: EVA foam. (A raptor mask in the process of being built; I've made a lot more progress...
  19. K9Lupus

    [Critique Requested] "Wolf Boy" An Upcoming Novel

    Hello everyone, I wanted to extend an invitation and request to each of you to take the time to read over and critique my main writing project, "Wolf Boy": "Wolf Boy" follows the journey of a girl named Nylca who finds solace exploring the woods around her home to escape from the tension of a...
  20. Prostapheresys

    My first attempt at gay erotica

    Hi! I wanted to share with you my first homoerotic short story in search of critique, the main reason being wanting to know if I can write enjoyable lewd stuff even if it's not my usual cup of tea (I consider myself a straight guy). I'm also looking for any big mistakes in the text since English...
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