I've been thinking about a sci-fi comic as a total geek, and would like feedback. Titled "New Terra", Its about the far future, when earth's geological activity has stopped. The atmosphere has depleted and the sun is expanding. With nowhere left to go on their inhospitible rock, millions of human minds are launched into the depths of the cosmos. A sleeper ship known as the "daedalus" after the proposed ship by the British interplanetary societies' model. We follow a marine, woken up from cryogenic stasis, and realizing he is no longer human, but a bio - engineered protogen- like species designed for the harsh environment of exoplanet sirius A, otherwise known as "new Terra". After coming to terms with himself, he and his crewmates board the dropship "sirius 9" and prepare to land at the salt flat used as a colonization surface. 877 (the main character's number) and his 29 other crew must survive in a diverse multitude of biomes after critical RCS failure came down and they landed on the other side of the planet. Heavily inspired by "the martian" by andy weir, and the movie "avatar". Please post criticism below.