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A poem a day keeps the rhyme going.

HistoricalyIncorrect

Well-Known Member
This terryfing man, was chosen by a fate.
When his love has vanished he was left with a hate.
Chosen by a fate to live without a life.
Dancing like a madman on the edge of a knife.

Flow of sweet love, will you come to him?
What our comrade did, why is he so grim?
Will you light a candles with him again?
Can you let him sleep? Away from the sour pain?

One day we will meet again, rest in each others arms.
My heart will beat again, in a rythm of your charms.
One day I will let you through my gate, to touch my cold heart.
To feel again, the beauty of your warm art.

I hope it is not too bad?
 

Foxy Emy

Scarlett / [Selena] / <Emy>
This terryfing man, was chosen by a fate.
When his love has vanished he was left with a hate.
Chosen by a fate to live without a life.
Dancing like a madman on the edge of a knife.

Flow of sweet love, will you come to him?
What our comrade did, why is he so grim?
Will you light a candles with him again?
Can you let him sleep? Away from the sour pain?

One day we will meet again, rest in each others arms.
My heart will beat again, in a rythm of your charms.
One day I will let you through my gate, to touch my cold heart.
To feel again, the beauty of your warm art.

I hope it is not too bad?

It is actually pretty good! An occasional bit of grammar aside, my only critique would be to replace abstract words like "fate," "hate," and "love" with more concrete words (i.e. words you can see, touch, smell, hear, or taste.)

I really liked the line "rhythm of your charms" as I can practically hear a rhythmic, sing song voice echoing a heart beat.

You have really good use of imagery, I would just like to see more of it!

On an unrelated note:

It's beginning to look a lot like Autumn
everywhere you go,
pumpkin spice at the coffee store, buying groceries there is more!
It's the time to let the cider flow!
 

Wulf Canavar

"He flashed a knowing grin...."
It's beginning to look a lot like Autumn
everywhere you go,
pumpkin spice at the coffee store, buying groceries there is more!
It's the time to let the cider flow!

Nice one!

Here's my next one. Another limerick for @Emyrelda Seoni .


There once was a foxxo named Emy
Who went to the drug store with Remy
They ran through the store
And fell to the floor
Laughing for reasons just any!
 

Pogo

I pounce i bounce.
Once upon a time not long ago, there lived a man who was made of snow.
Button eyes and a carrot nose; He wore a top hat and was frozen cold.
Every winter day he would sit out and stare, enjoying the weather and the mountain air.
 

Daithi Aaron Radcliff

X rated and animated
Everybody knows your gentle and everybody knows that's clear, but if people think that you're easy then they truly need to understand that you need to be held dear.
You are truly a caring person and by the side of your sister no matter the case, nobody should ever cheat you like a disgrace.
You care for others that are kind which is what I would be if we were looking eye to eye, I truly wouldn't be hard to try.
Even if you become angry I Will Stand By Your Side, there is no need for you to hide.
You are like a butterfly in its shell, the more you stay in that shell it will become harder and harder for anyone to tell.
Hey hey hey there is no need for you to cry or be upset, just seeing a single tear will be something for me to regret.
All I want is to Stand By Your Side and hold you close even when the times get hard, kiss you passionately and help you forget the battle scars.
Feel your hair between my fingertips all the same, black to Green my hearts pounding will always remain.
I may be legendary in my own way, but you are iconic and to not tell you that would be a true shame.
No matter if you are going berserk or in your normal form it doesn't matter to me, the beauty that I met already is the saiyan that I already seen.
Our journey starts here that's a promise for sure, a warrior like you is worth protecting and also worth the adorn.
I hope you become stronger and I hope ki continues to shine, but kale do me a favor and go super saiyan just one time.
 
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del

Guest
It was an oh so glorius winter night,
when the stars in the sky where shining so bright.
And snow was falling all around,
landing very softly on the ground.
Then the very next wonderous morning,
as the day was slowly dawning.
Wonderous furries from everywhere,
wolves, foxes and even a bear.
Furries of any type waking up,
opening the blinds and taking a look.
There was snow all over the beautiful land,
white snow looking all so grand.
Furries rushing outside so quick,
the white land looking oh so slick.
All furries gathering now,
standing infront of a building`s prow.
Clebrating in the snow all together,
what on earth could possibly be better!
Now it is the season for all,
forgetting axiety, stress and just having a ball.
Please I have just one request,
make this time one of your best!

-Merry christmas!
-Ice Sunshine (JPJK)
 

Foxy Emy

Scarlett / [Selena] / <Emy>
There once was a skunk named @Simo.
He didn't need any Beano;
he really only sprayed
when he was afraid
and he liked spanking foxes and... *inturrupted by a spank from a naughty skunk* EEEP! oOh!
 

Foxy Emy

Scarlett / [Selena] / <Emy>

Cannabiskitty

To Kill the Child; to Set the Adult Free
The dolls eyes are looking back at me
I can see him in them
Who's heart I stole until I killed myself
And the dolls eyes were mine

the dolls eyes
 

Pogo

I pounce i bounce.
Many seasons have come and gone.
Winters chill and summers bomb.
 

larigot

Well-Known Member
You only live twice
Once when you're born
And once when you look death in the face.


(Not mine, but I like it.)
 

HistoricalyIncorrect

Well-Known Member
There was once a woman named Jill.
Who used a dynamite stick for a 'drill'.
They've found her vagina in North Carolina and some of her tits in Brazil.





(I am going to hell)
 

Pogo

I pounce i bounce.
Coasting along.
Adrift and a song.
Strumming these cares away.
 
There once was a car of two colors
Once owned by quite a few others
It cost eight Benjamins
And tore up his shins
But it drove so the two were soon lovers

There once was a mosin nagant
After firing it jammed like a taunt
I got rubbing fluid
And worked the bolt good
Now it runs like a gun more affluent

The left audio crashed
During a teamfight
The laptop I bashed
To set everything right

Brrrrrrrrrt
Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrt
Brrrrrrrrrt
Brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrt
-An ode to Bastion

Rushing, turning, fire pouring
Blazing on trail to the point
Victory so alluring
Fire blazes around
My minigun roaring
One by one they go down
In gold my damage anoint
Till soon victory's sound

Rain above my head
Rain below my eyes
Wishing I was dead
Because so many sympathize
A burning sunbeam in my mind
Parts lower cloudiness
No longer blind
For now I know happiness
But fuck!
Where did I put that Umbrella!
 

xremeidiot

Friendly Red-Backed Butcher-Birb Boi
Roses are red
Every slave has a master
stupid-news-headlines-9.jpg
 
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Deleted member 82554

Guest
A poem a day keeps the monotony at bay.

A poem a day keeps the yiff away.

A poem a day makes me feel gay.

A poem about poems makes me go yay.


A poem, by Mr. Fox.
 
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Arvid

Guest
Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
...........
I have nothing else to put here,
So why am I here?
 

xremeidiot

Friendly Red-Backed Butcher-Birb Boi
Roses are red
Food is stored in a larder
If you've got trouble rhyming,
You just need to think harder!
 
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