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Art Critique (One is a Possible NSFW)

xaliceonfire

Kiralee
Here are a couple of my newer sketches/art.
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*Original Concept By Toby Fox*

I have to work on shading, I know. But anywho, that's all.
 
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xaliceonfire

Kiralee
I appreciate the advice. I have a really hard time finding balance when I'm sketching, and I'm trying my best to not just draw figures in baggy clothing to hide it. I haven't quite gotten the hang of it, and I'm thinking about trying gridline paper to hopefully improve it.

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^ This was my first digital art that I tried to do.

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^ This one was referenced from an artist I can't find anymore. (It was done a long time ago.)

I don't have my sketchbook with me at the moment so that's all I have.
 

Khazius

The Fruit Bat
I wish I could offer more advice but im hardly an art critic, clay is my medium not drawing. What you have here is pretty damned good, the only thing I noticed is that you dont seem to have a set style. Your undertale work seems to be almost painting like, your mrs. universe one is more of a drawing, but your fox seems like an actual drawing. Are you experimenting with different styles? I think their all wonderfully done but if you settled on one style you might be able to focus more on what you need to change.

Sorry if this wasnt very helpful :/
 

xaliceonfire

Kiralee
I wish I could offer more advice but im hardly an art critic, clay is my medium not drawing. What you have here is pretty damned good, the only thing I noticed is that you dont seem to have a set style. Your undertale work seems to be almost painting like, your mrs. universe one is more of a drawing, but your fox seems like an actual drawing. Are you experimenting with different styles? I think their all wonderfully done but if you settled on one style you might be able to focus more on what you need to change.

Sorry if this wasnt very helpful :/
No, totally helpful.

Yeah I haven't settled on a style for myself. I guess I can't really figure out what it is. x_x
 

Khazius

The Fruit Bat
No, totally helpful.

Yeah I haven't settled on a style for myself. I guess I can't really figure out what it is. x_x
Well you can pull off any of them, but I think if you spend a lot of time on one you could start excelling at that style even better :3
 

xaliceonfire

Kiralee
Well you can pull off any of them, but I think if you spend a lot of time on one you could start excelling at that style even better :3

Thank you. I'll have to try and figure it out.

Almost forgot: How big is the first drawing? Just looking at the thickness of the lines, I can tell you that you need to use finer lines or you need to draw bigger. It's probably that you need to draw bigger. Lots of people have this problem where they draw smaller and basically just cramp themselves. Pen(s) that can do variable thickness if you're going to be doing hard outlines would be beneficial.


Ehhhh, IMO bad habit. Don't care about your super-early stuff for critique either. I've really nothing to say about those two pieces.

It's a normal 8x10 canvas. As far as the references, I don't see a problem in drawing things that you like as well as original pieces. It was a reference.
 
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