Art Critique!!

[ssaannttoo]

Hello there everybody! I've recently started doing some animation. I know it isn't very good, but I would certainly like some tips and tricks! Thank you very much!

http://imgur.com/9wvPOSX

 

[ssaannttoo]

http://imgur.com/a/bTtogyR

I already found some problems with my editing. I left a couple of the beginning frames out. Here ya go :3

 

[Ziggy Schlacht]

Issues aren't with the animation quality, but the... content? I guess.

The speed changes quite a bit, which makes it feel jerky for an opening animation. If the overall speed was slower, with less overall motion in the same time frame it would be nicer to watch. Speed changes are natural to change direction, but it's too rapid.

 

[ssaannttoo]

Issues aren't with the animation quality, but the... content? I guess.

The speed changes quite a bit, which makes it feel jerky for an opening animation. If the overall speed was slower, with less overall motion in the same time frame it would be nicer to watch. Speed changes are natural to change direction, but it's too rapid.

So, less track, but more frames?

 

[Ziggy Schlacht]

You can keep the overall length the same, so it's the same number of frames. Just move less in that time so it ends up slower. Basically, a figure 8, pop to the middle and one.

 

[ssaannttoo]

Okie dokie. Thank you.

 

[Faexie]

I find it pretty difficult to get that kind of wiggle to look natural, you did an awesome job!

 

[ssaannttoo]

I find it pretty difficult to get that kind of wiggle to look natural, you did an awesome job!

Thank you very much for coming and giving me a comment :3