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(Closed)Any Criticism on a WIP before I go into the line art?

Lioedevon427

Very tired animator
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Any thoughts?
Background and right character are drawn by squishy cola on IG
 

Lioedevon427

Very tired animator
That's looking good. You are working with an odd perspective of the BG, after all.

Try to make the pose more dynamic. Curve the spine a bit. It is too stiff, like they are sitting with their backs against a chair.

Also, always remember to flip the canvas. The horns don't look like they come from the same place in both sides of the head.
Ah Tysm! This helps a lot!
 

Lioedevon427

Very tired animator
Update: this is now closed, if your interested here is the end result ^w^
 

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