(Closed)Any Criticism on a WIP before I go into the line art?

[Lioedevon427]

Any thoughts?
Background and right character are drawn by squishy cola on IG

 

[Nike_M_Aguaraguazu]

That's looking good. You are working with an odd perspective of the BG, after all.

Try to make the pose more dynamic. Curve the spine a bit. It is too stiff, like they are sitting with their backs against a chair.

Also, always remember to flip the canvas. The horns don't look like they come from the same place in both sides of the head.

 

[Lioedevon427]

That's looking good. You are working with an odd perspective of the BG, after all.

Try to make the pose more dynamic. Curve the spine a bit. It is too stiff, like they are sitting with their backs against a chair.

Also, always remember to flip the canvas. The horns don't look like they come from the same place in both sides of the head.

Ah Tysm! This helps a lot!

 

[Lioedevon427]

Update: this is now closed, if your interested here is the end result ^w^

 

[Nike_M_Aguaraguazu]

That's more like it. Great work!

 

[Lioedevon427]

That's more like it. Great work!

Ty ^w^
and again tysm for your help