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I'm going to write a simple TF story about a teenage boy growing a lizard tail, and that's it.
I know I need to have some things about the story figured out before I start writing it, so this is my story sheet.
I plan to be writing a good amount of simple TF stories to receive feedback until I get to what I actually want to write.
Any tips or thoughts?
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Tail Growth (Story Sheet)
I have a lot of story ideas like “Those Red Eyes” or the highly ambitious “Tack on a Tail”, but I'd like to build up to that. I will begin with a simple story where an unsuspecting teenager grows a tail due to a magic spell. The transformation will be continuous. The tail itself is a thick, meaty, scaled lizard tail, pretty simple. The story itself will be told in the past tense and framed as if our teenage boy is recalling the events of growing this tail. We can improve this effect by having the conclusion being told in the present tense.
TF Process
Magic spell hits him
He feels nauseous and dizzy
He decides to sit down hoping it would help him feel better
He can't sit comfortably.
He feels like he's being pushed up while sitting.
He goes to investigate and finds a stub that is slowly pushing outward at the end of the spine.
He leaps from his chair to feel around it.
Suddenly, the stub bursts open in a display of blood to reveal a tail.
The tail grows out much quicker than the stub ever did.
He realizes how easily he can whip the rather puny tail around and plays with it
He delights in the tail growing while whipping it around for a while.
After whipping it around for a while, the tail begins to lose some of it's flexibility.
The skin on it starts to feel more stiff.
The skin on the tail hardens and forms patterns.
Of course, these become scales.
The scales acquire a color and form odd patterns.
Then, the scales become so hard and thick that they push upward to create scales overlapping each other.
This all happens while the tail is still extending, by the way.
The extensions and scale growth cease, and he's left with a big lizard tail and no way to get rid of it to his knowledge
Conclusion
I know I need to have some things about the story figured out before I start writing it, so this is my story sheet.
I plan to be writing a good amount of simple TF stories to receive feedback until I get to what I actually want to write.
Any tips or thoughts?
_____________________________________
Tail Growth (Story Sheet)
I have a lot of story ideas like “Those Red Eyes” or the highly ambitious “Tack on a Tail”, but I'd like to build up to that. I will begin with a simple story where an unsuspecting teenager grows a tail due to a magic spell. The transformation will be continuous. The tail itself is a thick, meaty, scaled lizard tail, pretty simple. The story itself will be told in the past tense and framed as if our teenage boy is recalling the events of growing this tail. We can improve this effect by having the conclusion being told in the present tense.
TF Process
Magic spell hits him
He feels nauseous and dizzy
He decides to sit down hoping it would help him feel better
He can't sit comfortably.
He feels like he's being pushed up while sitting.
He goes to investigate and finds a stub that is slowly pushing outward at the end of the spine.
He leaps from his chair to feel around it.
Suddenly, the stub bursts open in a display of blood to reveal a tail.
The tail grows out much quicker than the stub ever did.
He realizes how easily he can whip the rather puny tail around and plays with it
He delights in the tail growing while whipping it around for a while.
After whipping it around for a while, the tail begins to lose some of it's flexibility.
The skin on it starts to feel more stiff.
The skin on the tail hardens and forms patterns.
Of course, these become scales.
The scales acquire a color and form odd patterns.
Then, the scales become so hard and thick that they push upward to create scales overlapping each other.
This all happens while the tail is still extending, by the way.
The extensions and scale growth cease, and he's left with a big lizard tail and no way to get rid of it to his knowledge
Conclusion