Critique for animations

[CastorClamwhistler]

Hey everybody,

I'm an aspiring animator looking to do some short looping animations of nsfw scenes with monster girls and some soft-furry. I wanted to show you all two of the four animations I'm working on and ask for feedback on them.

Both of these animations I'm close to finishing. I just need to clean up some over-glaring issues (i.e. hair, belly button missing, etc.) Descriptions of animations are in links provided. This weekend, I will be coloring them in.

Thanks in advance to those who are willing to help out.

Beaver position

Salmon blowjob position

 

[Trevorbluesquirrel]

BEAVER: The foot and corner flashing are a distraction, and how his face appears through her arm!

SALMON: Her wrist appearing through his leg!