Critique: Critique Request on adult scene

[WildKitFox]

Hey all!

I'm working hard on improving my drawing, and was hoping to get some feedback. This is my first real attempt at placing two different characters in the same scene as if they were supposed to be inhabiting the same space and all. It was much harder than I cared for it to be, and I was hoping you fine folks could maybe give some wonderful advice?

It is a m/m scene, so if that's something you'd rather not see, feel free to pass it up.

The drawing is posted here: www.furaffinity.net: Reward by WildFox373

I appreciate anything you folks have to say!

Reny

 

[starrystomps]

Hey! its very well drawn, and the anatomy is great. You did a very good job, honestly! The only thing I'd recommend is changing up the expressions a bit so the viewer knows how they're feeling! raise some eyebrows, make those little awkward grins appear if that's how they're feeling! Once again, wonderful job though!

 

[WildKitFox]

Hey! its very well drawn, and the anatomy is great. You did a very good job, honestly! The only thing I'd recommend is changing up the expressions a bit so the viewer knows how they're feeling! raise some eyebrows, make those little awkward grins appear if that's how they're feeling! Once again, wonderful job though!

Hey, Thanks! I'm still working on trying to get the characters to appear more natural and less rigid overall, to include the way they hold themselves and their facial expressions, so maybe I'll sit down and do an expression study page or something, just to get some experience there!

I appreciate the feedback!

 

[starrystomps]

No problem at all, Have a wonderful day!

 

[Vinfang]

How is the anatomy great? @.@
Hope these help.

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[WildKitFox]

How is the anatomy great? @.@
Hope these help.

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Thanks! I think I really need to do some serious figure and anatomy studies. I still struggle really bad with perspective and proportions