Critique Request!

[WildKitFox]

Hey everyone!

I'm desperately trying to improve my art skills and would love any and all advice/critique/suggestions you all may have on my work. My latest sketch is a WIP that's found here: www.furaffinity.net: Quinn WIP by WildFox373

I intend to color it eventually, but would love to here what everyone thinks and how I may be able to improve!

Thanks!

 

[Punji]

I think his legs look a bit scrawny, but it's really good!

 

[LazyNightChaos]

I agree with Punji. A bit more muscle to the thigh, calf, and ankle would help the flow of your WIP. It looks like you might have put the elbow bend a bit high on the arm on the left. If you moved it down a smidge and bulked up the spot where the bend was, it should mirror the other side more.

Keep up the good work, it looks great so far!

 

[Cosmic-FS]

Really good anatomy and the structure is spot on, but maybe a little disproportionate in places (the feet are a little large). I also like how the tight collar compresses the neck fur. That's a good bit of detail most people would forget about. Overall, I think it's pretty good and can't wait to see it colored.

 

[Trevorbluesquirrel]

The middle claws look too thick, I think it would look better and be more realistic if they were they were the same size as the edge claws!

Very nice art coming along!

 

[WildKitFox]

I think his legs look a bit scrawny, but it's really good!

Thanks! Something seemed off about his legs. I think they are a little short too.

 

[WildKitFox]

I agree with Punji. A bit more muscle to the thigh, calf, and ankle would help the flow of your WIP. It looks like you might have put the elbow bend a bit high on the arm on the left. If you moved it down a smidge and bulked up the spot where the bend was, it should mirror the other side more.

Keep up the good work, it looks great so far!

Thank you, I did have problems with that arm in particular haha

 

[WildKitFox]

Really good anatomy and the structure is spot on, but maybe a little disproportionate in places (the feet are a little large). I also like how the tight collar compresses the neck fur. That's a good bit of detail most people would forget about. Overall, I think it's pretty good and can't wait to see it colored.

Thank you! I think I have a particularly hard time with consistency in my drawing. Something I certainly need to work on!

 

[WildKitFox]

The middle claws look too thick, I think it would look better and be more realistic if they were they were the same size as the edge claws!

Very nice art coming along!

Thank you! I think I need to spend a bit of time doing a paw study or something to get them looking a little better, because I really struggle with them