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Critique: Snow Leopard tf Artwork with photoshopped background

SinglePringle

I'm making this comment at 1am

Trevorbluesquirrel

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They look slightly too big for the scene, a bit smaller size, perhaps?

Maybe a few more shreds of clothing around their bodies?

Her paw should have 1 more toe, the other paws should also have claws, and his tail tip should look like hers, unless those are still in the process of changing!

And his tongue should be red!

That space in the IF sticks out too much!

Also, the sunlit background is quite bright! Darkening it slightly would be easier on the eyes!
 

SinglePringle

I'm making this comment at 1am
They look slightly too big for the scene, a bit smaller size, perhaps?

Maybe a few more shreds of clothing around their bodies?

Her paw should have 1 more toe, the other paws should also have claws, and his tail tip should look like hers, unless those are still in the process of changing!

And his tongue should be red!

That space in the IF sticks out too much!

Also, the sunlit background is quite bright! Darkening it slightly would be easier on the eyes!
Thanks for the feedback! Lol I don't know how the text thing got screwed up must've been a blooper
 
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