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Critique: Critique Wanted - Furry,Fantasy,Body Swap Novel


Maniacally Smiling Canine
Zack's Quest
Chapter One​
Zack a very isolated person, he doesn't enjoy parties, large dinners, or even small get together, opting to spend his weekends alone watching movies and playing video games and thats the way he likes it. Unfortunately for him a freak accident sends him to a fantasy world injuring him horribly in the process. In order to save his dying body he must have his soul placed inside a female vixen and embark on a quest with a group of misfit to find a healer.

WARNING THIS STORY CONTAINS;Adult language, brief nudity, and blood

(Please critique my plot so far, grammar, and pacing)
docs.google.com: Zack's Quest Ch1 rough draft 2