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Critiques and comments, please!

JZLobo

Well-Known Member
I'm writing a serial of werewolf stories and I am absolutely dying for more feedback. It's the tale of a young werewolf named Samson, orphaned by werewolf-hunting cultists and winding up on his own until humans capture him for horrific scientific experiments. By the time he's rescued and taken in by a pack, he's a 16-year-old left with many scars--both physical and psychological. Terrified of rejection and winding up on his own again, he does all he can to prove his worth to a pack whose ways he knows nothing about.

This story explores issues of social anxiety, PTSD, and depression. I'd love to know your thoughts on my characters, my worldbuilding, anything that catches your eye. The story starts here.
 
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