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Critique: Crituque my giantess Sonic OC story?

Should I try to wrap up the story or draw it out?

  • Draw it out! If Amanda wants to destroy the entire city and probably the next, it's still good.

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  • Try to wrap it up within three chapters.

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  • Perhaps end on a cliffhanger?

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  • Do what your friends said, end on the nice note that her daughter redeems her mother.

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  • Don't be afraid to finish the story with a maxium chapter post.

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Howdy! I've recently made an ADULT Macro theme'd story involving my villainess, Amanda based on a roleplay I've had on Discord. While this story has exploded from what my friend and I originally had, I would like some ideas on how to move forwards in the story. I have one major issue with the story, (other than errors). I'm afraid of concluding it. I've taken a poll on Deviantart and my friends wanted me to have it where the villainess's daughter, Bianca gets her mother to shrink back to normal size, but I want to add a lot more macro themes to this story. I wanted it originally to be 12 acts, but I feel that maybe a bit too much for the readers.

Here's the story acts thus far:

www.furaffinity.net: Amanda's BIG Day Act One by Jaredthefox92

www.furaffinity.net: Amanda's BIG Day Act Two by Jaredthefox92

www.furaffinity.net: Amanda's BIG Day Act Three by Jaredthefox92

www.furaffinity.net: Amandas BIG Day Act Four by Jaredthefox92