Feedback for a fanfic project I'm working on

[WhiteFur]

Hi, so I've been working on a Kung Fu Panda fanfic project recently (https://archiveofourown.org/works/39727284/chapters/99458667), and I'm still kinda new to the writing style of fanfiction. I'm creating this thread in the hope that more experienced writers would be able to offer some feedback/advice on parts that I could improve. Thanks ^^

 

[WhiteFur]

First chapter, needs line breaks to avoid being a wall of text, please run it though Grammarly, I see grammar mistakes.

Ok, thanks ^^