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Foam base critique/red line

I just began working on my first foam base, and I was able to complete quite a bit of it tonight but I wanted to get some feedback on it before I continues working. It is a helmet style base, and the intended character is going to be a white german shepherd. My main concerns are that the muzzle might be too short and that the ears are slightly uneven. It is a toony character, so I don't know if the short muzzle will effect it's appearance negatively. And I have tried to straighten the ears, they are at a point where I don't know if I should just start over or if they will look alright once they are furred.
Thanks in advance
Camo~


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Hi Camo!

I made some red lines for you.

http://i.imgur.com/N0Nrj7w.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/KjRyNWx.jpg

I think the muzzle is just the right size, actually. A friendly piece of advice: If something looks weird without fur, furring doesn't usually fix it. Save yourself the fur! I've wasted soooo much fur that way. You're on the right track - flesh out the shape a little more and keep it up!
 
Hi Camo!

I made some red lines for you.

http://i.imgur.com/N0Nrj7w.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/KjRyNWx.jpg

I think the muzzle is just the right size, actually. A friendly piece of advice: If something looks weird without fur, furring doesn't usually fix it. Save yourself the fur! I've wasted soooo much fur that way. You're on the right track - flesh out the shape a little more and keep it up!

Thank you very much for the red lines, they are very helpful :3
 
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