Dreammaker33
Cute cow that likes computer hardware
What do I need to do to improve the design of my character?
Current design of Melisa.
Current design of Melisa.
Seems like you already have a pretty clear idea as to what you like/want from your sona so to improve I'd say just keep drawing and refining. This is your sona after all, don't let someone else tell you what to do with it.
That said, if I was where you are right now I'd look for drawings of simular species and identify parts, styles, and techniques that they used which you like and incorporate them into your art. You might consider accessories, perhaps something that fits the characters background or personality. Chose wisely and you may even make the sona easier to draw
If you want some specific criticism there are distinctly feral elements mixed with Anthro and I'd suggest moving slightly in one direction or the other to make the design more harmonious. The utters for example are placed and styled very feral, but the character is predominantly Anthro. I'd consider making the utters more Anthro to fit the style, or side-step the issue and add an apron. And a Sun hat!
Maybe give her more curves?