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I'm planning to write a TF story where a detective slowly turns into an "aquatic naga" of sorts.
The TF starts with some tail growth at first (because that's the most important part), but near the end I need to describe tail growth, scale growth, gills and fins, leg loss, horn growth, and whatever I need to touch on outside of the transformation.
At this point, I don't want to describe the tail, then the scales, then the fins, etc. If I describe each part of the transformation one at a time, it feels stiff and robotic.
So, how do I describe all of the moving parts of a complex transformation simultaneously in a way that feels natural?
The TF starts with some tail growth at first (because that's the most important part), but near the end I need to describe tail growth, scale growth, gills and fins, leg loss, horn growth, and whatever I need to touch on outside of the transformation.
At this point, I don't want to describe the tail, then the scales, then the fins, etc. If I describe each part of the transformation one at a time, it feels stiff and robotic.
So, how do I describe all of the moving parts of a complex transformation simultaneously in a way that feels natural?