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Just did this fursona request for someone, and I’m pretty proud of it.

RangerReb

Quitters never win, winners never quit.
As the title states, I have a request I just completed that I’m pretty proud of.

You can see the piece and description here, but I’ll post some images to show my process from start to finish:
www.furaffinity.net: Blitz-Fursona Request by RangerReb

First, I started with a headshot:
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Then I did full body lineart:
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Then I added flat color:
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And finally I finished it off with shading and a background:
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Hope you all like her! This is my first attempt at drawing a female furry, so it was a bit of a challenge. Let me know what y’all think.
 

TyraWadman

The Silent Observer
At first I was like 'hm'
and then I was like 'hmm?'
and then I was like 'hm.'
And then it was 'HMMM???'

I think it looks spiffy. I can see the work you put into the shading/lighting.
The only critique I would offer, is that, given where the cleavage line begins, the breasts need to be um... bigger. Not like, bigger, bigger, but... despite implying a large chest, it looks fairly flat. Unless she isn't meant to be super busty, in which case, the cleavage line can pretty much just be removed.

And if I wanted to be super picky, I'd point out the little flecks of colour and holes in the pants and bottom hand, but you rocked it and made it match with the BG. That shii be spanglin', yo.
 

RangerReb

Quitters never win, winners never quit.
At first I was like 'hm'
and then I was like 'hmm?'
and then I was like 'hm.'
And then it was 'HMMM???'

I think it looks spiffy. I can see the work you put into the shading/lighting.
The only critique I would offer, is that, given where the cleavage line begins, the breasts need to be um... bigger. Not like, bigger, bigger, but... despite implying a large chest, it looks fairly flat. Unless she isn't meant to be super busty, in which case, the cleavage line can pretty much just be removed.

And if I wanted to be super picky, I'd point out the little flecks of colour and holes in the pants and bottom hand, but you rocked it and made it match with the BG. That shii be spanglin', yo.
Thank you for the detailed feedback and compliments!

She was meant to have an average/bit on the large sized bust, but as this is my first female I ever did, I had a hard time with figuring out how to draw clothing realistically without compromising bust size, because honestly, leather jackets don’t always emphasize chest size. But your critique is perfectly understandable and I agree. How would you go about improving it the next go around?

I’m not sure if I see what you’re talking about in the second paragraph, but I’ll take your word for it. I’m also not sure if BG means background or not, but I’ll take the compliment lol. Much appreciated!
 

TyraWadman

The Silent Observer
Thank you for the detailed feedback and compliments!

She was meant to have an average/bit on the large sized bust, but as this is my first female I ever did, I had a hard time with figuring out how to draw clothing realistically without compromising bust size, because honestly, leather jackets don’t always emphasize chest size. But your critique is perfectly understandable and I agree. How would you go about improving it the next go around?

I’m not sure if I see what you’re talking about in the second paragraph, but I’ll take your word for it. I’m also not sure if BG means background or not, but I’ll take the compliment lol. Much appreciated!

BG means background, yes. XD sorry.
And I couldn't really explain it, so I scribbled it. Just slight curvature of the lines is all that (I think) would be needed. So not much, really. You dun did good.
I know leather isn't always the most flattering material, so definitely use your own judgement/preference! Mine is more of a suggestion.
 

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