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Hi, everyone!
I'm new here and was hoping for some feedback on a new story I've been writing. It's the first chapter of a larger M/M romance story, SFW but with some adult language. The story is called Blue Stripes and follows Blue the tiger as he meets Kai, a bear, while he is studying at college. It focuses mainly on the pair building confidence and becoming more comfortable with their situation. This first chapter is Kai's mother inadvertently helping Blue after he was jumped on the way home from college. Even though it is only a short chapter, I hope people can give me some feedback on setting and characterisation. I would really appreciate it.
Thank you so much!
Here's the story: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/39203078/
I'm new here and was hoping for some feedback on a new story I've been writing. It's the first chapter of a larger M/M romance story, SFW but with some adult language. The story is called Blue Stripes and follows Blue the tiger as he meets Kai, a bear, while he is studying at college. It focuses mainly on the pair building confidence and becoming more comfortable with their situation. This first chapter is Kai's mother inadvertently helping Blue after he was jumped on the way home from college. Even though it is only a short chapter, I hope people can give me some feedback on setting and characterisation. I would really appreciate it.
Thank you so much!
Here's the story: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/39203078/