looking for critiques - anthro busts

[sonne.wytai]

i'm trying to learn how to draw anthros and i did lineart of two characters; i'll color them sometime soon, but i wanted to see if there's some glaring mistake i just don't see before i dedicate more time to it u-u
thanks in advance!

 

[Ramiel0912]

Hey! I noticed the perspective on the first character was a little off, other than that, this is great ^^ good job

 

[sonne.wytai]

Hey! I noticed the perspective on the first character was a little off, other than that, this is great ^^ good job

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OOOH so that was bothering me !! i already colored it in but i will definitely keep it in mind for future drawings ! the way you outlined it is very helpful, so thank you a lot hehe