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Howdy yall!
I'm hoping to get some feedback on my story before the forums get nuked. So far I've managed to write 2 chapters and 11k words so there is something to read.
I'd appreciate it if people could read at least some of it.
The story is about the fennec fox named Colt going through his military service while reuniting with his childhood friend, while also getting some new acquaintances as well.
Overall, I'd say it's a light-hearted story with erotic moments sprinkled in.
All feedback is welcome but be gentle. >w<
This is my first time writing a longer story so keep that in mind. (I'm dum)
I will post the story to Fur Affinity in the future if yall think that it has any value at all. Else wise I just use it as writing practice.
The story is in the attachments as PDF
Here is art for some characters in the story:
Colt: In the attachment
Jane: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/44039634/
Bessie: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/42475762/
Hopefully at least someone reads it...
I'm hoping to get some feedback on my story before the forums get nuked. So far I've managed to write 2 chapters and 11k words so there is something to read.
I'd appreciate it if people could read at least some of it.
The story is about the fennec fox named Colt going through his military service while reuniting with his childhood friend, while also getting some new acquaintances as well.
Overall, I'd say it's a light-hearted story with erotic moments sprinkled in.
All feedback is welcome but be gentle. >w<
This is my first time writing a longer story so keep that in mind. (I'm dum)
I will post the story to Fur Affinity in the future if yall think that it has any value at all. Else wise I just use it as writing practice.
The story is in the attachments as PDF
Here is art for some characters in the story:
Colt: In the attachment
Jane: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/44039634/
Bessie: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/42475762/
Hopefully at least someone reads it...