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Daithi Aaron Radcliff

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Name:
Daithi Aaron Radcliff

Age:
23 (With a 56 year old mind.)

Sex:
Male

Species:
Loboan Night Wolf

Height:
5’9

Weight:
223 Ib

{Appearance}
- Hair and fur:
Hair colour (Black and Blonde White hair with Green hairs.)
Hairstyle ( Long jungle dread hair)
Facial Hairstyle (Goatee with a light mustache)

Skin and fur color (Dark Gray fur with brown skin)

- Markings:
The mark of an alchemist on his stomach.

- Eye color:
Black yellow pupils

- Other features:
Body Figure (Slightly muscular)

Piercings (Skull Earring left ear,Black earrings left ear,Tag Earring right ear,5 tongue piercings.)

Razor sharp claws (His nails are able to slash through metal.)

Scars (Scars on his body and a scar on chest that look like somebody rip through his chest once.)

Frequently worn jewellery(Silver demon ring that turns into armor for the wearer.)

Red wood (Red wooden guitar that can turn into a gun and also a blade hidden within. It can also shoot out ninja stars in daggers. It can also turn into a spear and be used as a battery ram.)

-Behavior and Personality:
Daithi personality is that of an Extrovert, is self-centered and hedonistic, not to mention rude, lewd, vulgar, conceited, temperamental, unhinged, glib, smooth and self-assured bold, poised, had a way with the ladies personality. To a great extent, Dai gets his wish-fulfillment. He is a sweetheart when he is not bugging out, good to be around. somewhat shy, and somewhat insecure about himself; worried that he is out of place because most people didn't like him. When he is with those who are close to him, Dai is usually withdrawn, shy and only speaks to others when they speak to him. Dai has a problem where he says something mean to people when he doesn't know that he said it and another thing is when he loses or is wrong but he can't admit that he is wrong about certain things which makes a few people not like him even though when he is at most points right.

-Skills:
Enhanced (Strength, Durability, Agility,Reflexes,Speed, Jumping, Stamina, Smelling, Hearing, Senses, Healing, Life Span.)
Sonic Howls
Sharp Claws & Teeth
Wolfwere Physiology
Werewolf Physiology
Canine Physiology
Shadow-Metal Attacks
Umbrakinetic Combat
Imperial Panther kung fu - Northern Wolf Style
Darkness Attacks
Umbrakinetic Combat

-Weaknesses:
Weak Defense and over exerting himself
May be connected to the phases of the Moon (Full Moon in particular) and either only be able to transform or be involuntarily forced to change during one.
May cause changes of mental abilities/personality.
May include loss of memory of human emotion and life.
May include loss of self-control.
May include shift towards canine level of intelligence/instincts.
May be vulnerable to various canine weaknesses such as high pitch or loud noises or foul smell.
Applied electricity, medicine or enzymes may prevent transformation.
Can be outmatched by Supernatural Hunter Physiology.
Weak against Light Manipulation.
May be outdone by any other user of a power that creates light (e.g. Fire Manipulation, Energy Constructs, etc.)


-Likes:
A good fight
Animals
Video games in the ways of fighting and fantasy
Traveling
Helping others
Peace and quiet
Asian culture
Women(Villainous,Monsters, Sexy, Hybrids,ones who glasses, different races, Cosplays, elves, maids Etc.)
Comic books
Romantic novel
Horror movies with a good story
Sci-fi things (Aliens and being sorry different worlds)
The smell of blood
Anime and manga
Cosplay
Good food

-Dislikes:
Playing with fire
Someone stepping on his tail or pulling on his ears without permission.
Getting killed
Being put in jail
Children getting hurt
Fighting without reason
Heroes that are really villains in sheep's clothing
People talking about the world like they own it
monsters that kill for no reason
The thought of becoming crazy and by crazy I mean full on psychotic
Good people being treated like they are monsters but they were once human….
Cooking or playing music for people who do not deserve it….


-History:
Daithi was originally born around adults his whole life, he grew up with his brother’s dad sense of morality, his mom's insanity, his grandfather's honesty, and his dad's idiocy. He ended up packing his stuff and took his uncle's old car. Daithi wanted to become a musician and a writer for a living but he also needed to pay the bills. Dai decided to write about his adventures but something unusual always “happens” when he is around. He has no memory of his past and the way that Monster Hunters, Shadows, Aliens, other weird things after him it's gonna be awhile before he can stop traveling.
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-Clothing/Personal Style:
He likes the traditional Japanese clothing but he dresses in 90’s anime style of dress wear. Dai wears a Chinese camo colored military jacket, black shorts, black Mitch Match fingerless gloves and toeless socks.

-Goal:
Finding a good gal, have kids, have a family, and live on an island
-Profession:
Writing poetry
-Personal quote:
•Greetings and salutations

•Good things happen to good people

•Business before pleasure but pleasure is always better than business.

-Theme song:

-Birthdate:
January 27 1995

-Star sign:
Aquarius

-Favorite food:
Asian,American,Southern,Caribbean,and Soul

-Favorite drink:
Smoothies,Water, Milk, Flavored water,Milkshakes

-Favorite location:
Any Forest

-Favorite weather:
60 degree weather

-Favorite color:
Red

-Least liked food:
Foods mixed with ketchup and mayonnaise

-Least liked drink:
Dirty water

-Least liked location:
Jail

-Least liked weather:
100 degree weather

-Favorite person:
His brother
Least liked person:
His mom

-Friends:
Sailor Rose

-Relations:

-Enemies:
Shadows
Monster hunters
Factions
FBI
FTF

-Significant other:
Haven't been found yet

-Orientation:
Freelance worker
Traveller
 
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Tyno

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When did they have this Loboan Night Wolf in ben 10 i've never seen one.
 

Daithi Aaron Radcliff

X rated and animated
Yeah I kind of mixed his DNA as there is a backstory to this but the whole template was too much.
 

AvienWithFur

furrytrash#9434
Yeah, you should really shorten this, you don't gave to remove stuff, you should just compress the format

Name:

Name

Can Become
Name: Name

You also don't have to put like every food Daithi ate and liked in the like section.

Cheers :3
 

Daithi Aaron Radcliff

X rated and animated
Yeah, you should really shorten this, you don't gave to remove stuff, you should just compress the format

Name:

Name

Can Become
Name: Name

You also don't have to put like every food Daithi ate and liked in the like section.

Cheers :3
I know but I always like to be pacific. But I know what you mean.
 

AvienWithFur

furrytrash#9434
I know but I always like to be pacific. But I know what you mean.
*specific* :)

Yeah, that's cool and all, but then move the likes closer to the bottom or something so we can get through the list. And compressing your format makes it look nicer too. For multiple items you can just do

Likes:
Literally
Every
Food

Edit: BOLD YOUR TITLES SO WE CAN TELL THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN TITLES AND THE THINGS!

Title: Content

Title:
Content

:3
 

Daithi Aaron Radcliff

X rated and animated
*specific* :)

Yeah, that's cool and all, but then move the likes closer to the bottom or something so we can get through the list. And compressing your format makes it look nicer too. For multiple items you can just do

Likes:
Literally
Every
Food

Edit: BOLD YOUR TITLES SO WE CAN TELL THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN TITLES AND THE THINGS!

Title: Content

Title:
Content

:3
Fixed... Kinda as I need a different template.
 

MissNook

Well-Known Member
@Daithi Aaron Radcliff I've done a quick edit of your layout
{BASIC INFORMATION}
Full name:Daithi Aaron Radcliff
Nickname(s) or Alias:Dai
Gender:Male
Species:Loboan Night Wolf
Age:23 (With a 56 year old mind.)
Birthday:January 27 1995
Sexuality:Straight
Nationality:????
Religion:Buddhist
City or town of birth:New Zebra City
Currently lives:Island Of Lost Spirit
Languages spoken:English,French,Japanese,Chinese,German,Spanish,Wolf,Alien
Native language:English
Relationship Status:Complicated
{PHYSICAL APPEARANCE}
Height:5’9
Weight:223 ib
Figure/build:Slightly muscular
Hair colour:Black and Blonde White hair with Green hairs
Hairstyle:Long jungle dread hair
Facial Hairstyle:Goatee with a light mustache
Eye colour:Black yellow pupils
Skin/fur/etc colour:Dark Gray fur with brown skin
Tattoos:The mark of an alchemist on his stomach.
Piercings:Skull Earring left ear, Black earrings left ear, Tag Earring right ear, 5 tongue piercings
Scars/distinguishing marks:Scars on his body and a scar on chest that look like somebody rip through his chest once.
Preferred style of clothing:He likes the traditional Japanese clothing but he dresses in 90’s anime style of dress wear. Dai wears a Chinese camo colored military jacket, black shorts, black Mitch Match fingerless gloves and toeless socks.
Frequently worn jewellery/accessories:Silver demon ring that turns into armor for the wearer.
{HEALTH}
Smoker?:Rarely
Drinker?:Loosely
Recreational Drug User? Which?:Yes and Dragon Blood Ball (This gives the user the strength, Speed, and endurance of a dragon.)
Addictions:Anime and manga
Allergies:Mosquito bites
Any physical ailments/illnesses/disabilities:The Dark Curse
Any medication regularly taken:Moon Pill
{PERSONALITY}
Personality:His personality is that of an introvert who has trouble talking to women. Dai is somewhat shy, and somewhat depressed; worried that was placed out of range because most people didn't like him. When he is with those who are close to him, Dai is usually withdrawn, shy and only speaks to others when they speak to him. Dai has a problem where he says something mean to people when he doesn't know that he said it and another thing is when he loses or is wrong but he can't admit that he is wrong about certain things which makes a few people not like him even though when he is at most points right.
Likes:
A good fight
Animals
Video games in the ways of fighting and fantasy
Traveling
Helping others
Peace and quiet
Otaku culture
Asian culture
Psychopathic girls/bad woman/ crazy chicks
Villainous girls
Comic books
Romantic novel
Horror movies with a good story
Sci-fi things (Aliens and being sorry different worlds)
The smell of blood
Anime and manga
Girls in glasses (especially)
Monster girls
Sexy Female maids
Cosplays, especially female cosplayers
Dark half elves
half elves
Catgirl
Good food
Reading and studying
Working
Performing for people
Traveling
Discovering new things
Everything else about him you will have to learn on your own as it is still unknown.
Tea
Horror manga and Japanese horror movies
Horror anime
Amusement parks
His medication and also needles
Foods that have something to do with
Stars
Dislikes:
Playing with fire
Someone stepping on his tail or pulling on his ears without permission.
Getting killed
Being put in jail
Fighting soldiers
School days the anime
Being called a freak
Creepy demon dolls with human faces (Like Chucky)
People trying to force him to eat
Being laughed at for being different
Horror movies without a good story
Children getting hurt
Murder without reason
Fighting without reason
Killers without a decent backstory to their name
Heroes that are really villains in sheep's clothing
People talking about the world like they own it
monsters that kill for no reason
The thought of becoming crazy and by crazy I mean full on psychotic
Good people being treated like they are monsters but they were once human….
Cooking or playing music for people who do not deserve it….
Someone drinking his wine without asking him first.
Fighting weak opponents only want to use guns to save themselves.
Going on new journeys with annoying people.
Mixed gender females
Guys trying to hit on him
TRAPS (transgender males)
Fears/phobias:
Demon dolls
Being alone
Having to replace his death over and over
Having to watch people eat in front of him
Having to think about dying without having a family for kids of his own…..
Being put back into the devil’s cage. (They cage that's not even the strongest demon or angel can break out of. God himself couldn't even break out of it and that Drove of him mad, that cage brings out the worst in people, reveals the fears to whoever stays in it.)
Being alone.
Seeing abuse or rape.
War or killing without reason.
Bullying.
People being burned.
Being laughed at.
Never being able to eat again.
Favourite colour:Red
Hobbies:Writing poetry
Fixing things
Fishing
Adventuring
Cooking
Reading
Taste in music:Classical
Heavy metal
Rock and roll
Country
Pop
{SKILLS}
Talents/skills:
Enhanced Strength
Enhanced Durability
Enhanced Agility
Enhanced Reflexes
Enhanced Speed
Enhanced Jumping
Enhanced Stamina
Enhanced Smelling
Enhanced Hearing
Enhanced Senses
Enhanced Healing
Enhanced Life Span
Sonic Howls
Sharp Claws
Sharp Teeth
Wolfwere Physiology
Werewolf Physiology
Canine Physiology
Ability to drive a car? Operate any other vehicles?:Yes and he is able to operate a motorcycle.
{EATING HABITS}
Omnivore/Carnivore/Herbivore (Vegetarian):Omnivore but more of a Carnivore when the moon is full
Favourite food(s):All types especially Asian food and American food plus Spanish dishes
Favourite drink(s):Fruit juices especially mango juice, Champagne Cola
Disliked food(s):Bananas,mayonnaise mixed ketchup or just plain mayo.
Disliked drink(s):Vodka,Pee
{HOUSE AND HOME}
Describe the character's house/home:He lives in a house that looks small on the outside but huge on the inside.
Do they share their home with anyone? Who?:Dai lives with his adopted kids (10 year old girl named Molly and a 7 year old boy named Max.)
A a blue horned marked liger named Lita.
A tribe of foxes (Diablo the flame fox, Fiona the Winter Fox, Suki the love fox, Jazz the Poison Fox, Ash the Autumn Fox, Dearest The Swamp Fox, Shiro the Seal fox, Nami The Flame and Ice Fox, Soul The Spirit Fox, Sky and Sora the demon flame twin foxes.)
Purple dark fox
Alphonse the Cyborg Dog
Blazer the space wolf
Significant/special belongings:The Demon Ring
A photo of his brother and sister
His guitar that he was given as a gift by a scientist but he customized it.

{CAREER}
Level of education:9th and 10 grade
Qualifications:Good cook
Travel through universes
Has done multiple jobs
Skilled Swordsman
he has worked for mercenary groups
Killed off close to 115 Shadows
Able to travel days or weeks without food.
Current job title and description:Adventurer
Travel
Open worker
Name of employer:Unknown
Theme song:
 

Daithi Aaron Radcliff

X rated and animated
@Daithi Aaron Radcliff I've done a quick edit of your layout
{BASIC INFORMATION}
Full name:Daithi Aaron Radcliff
Nickname(s) or Alias:Dai
Gender:Male
Species:Loboan Night Wolf
Age:23 (With a 56 year old mind.)
Birthday:January 27 1995
Sexuality:Straight
Nationality:????
Religion:Buddhist
City or town of birth:New Zebra City
Currently lives:Island Of Lost Spirit
Languages spoken:English,French,Japanese,Chinese,German,Spanish,Wolf,Alien
Native language:English
Relationship Status:Complicated
{PHYSICAL APPEARANCE}
Height:5’9
Weight:223 ib
Figure/build:Slightly muscular
Hair colour:Black and Blonde White hair with Green hairs
Hairstyle:Long jungle dread hair
Facial Hairstyle:Goatee with a light mustache
Eye colour:Black yellow pupils
Skin/fur/etc colour:Dark Gray fur with brown skin
Tattoos:The mark of an alchemist on his stomach.
Piercings:Skull Earring left ear, Black earrings left ear, Tag Earring right ear, 5 tongue piercings
Scars/distinguishing marks:Scars on his body and a scar on chest that look like somebody rip through his chest once.
Preferred style of clothing:He likes the traditional Japanese clothing but he dresses in 90’s anime style of dress wear. Dai wears a Chinese camo colored military jacket, black shorts, black Mitch Match fingerless gloves and toeless socks.
Frequently worn jewellery/accessories:Silver demon ring that turns into armor for the wearer.
{HEALTH}
Smoker?:Rarely
Drinker?:Loosely
Recreational Drug User? Which?:Yes and Dragon Blood Ball (This gives the user the strength, Speed, and endurance of a dragon.)
Addictions:Anime and manga
Allergies:Mosquito bites
Any physical ailments/illnesses/disabilities:The Dark Curse
Any medication regularly taken:Moon Pill
{PERSONALITY}
Personality:His personality is that of an introvert who has trouble talking to women. Dai is somewhat shy, and somewhat depressed; worried that was placed out of range because most people didn't like him. When he is with those who are close to him, Dai is usually withdrawn, shy and only speaks to others when they speak to him. Dai has a problem where he says something mean to people when he doesn't know that he said it and another thing is when he loses or is wrong but he can't admit that he is wrong about certain things which makes a few people not like him even though when he is at most points right.
Likes:
A good fight
Animals
Video games in the ways of fighting and fantasy
Traveling
Helping others
Peace and quiet
Otaku culture
Asian culture
Psychopathic girls/bad woman/ crazy chicks
Villainous girls
Comic books
Romantic novel
Horror movies with a good story
Sci-fi things (Aliens and being sorry different worlds)
The smell of blood
Anime and manga
Girls in glasses (especially)
Monster girls
Sexy Female maids
Cosplays, especially female cosplayers
Dark half elves
half elves
Catgirl
Good food
Reading and studying
Working
Performing for people
Traveling
Discovering new things
Everything else about him you will have to learn on your own as it is still unknown.
Tea
Horror manga and Japanese horror movies
Horror anime
Amusement parks
His medication and also needles
Foods that have something to do with
Stars
Dislikes:
Playing with fire
Someone stepping on his tail or pulling on his ears without permission.
Getting killed
Being put in jail
Fighting soldiers
School days the anime
Being called a freak
Creepy demon dolls with human faces (Like Chucky)
People trying to force him to eat
Being laughed at for being different
Horror movies without a good story
Children getting hurt
Murder without reason
Fighting without reason
Killers without a decent backstory to their name
Heroes that are really villains in sheep's clothing
People talking about the world like they own it
monsters that kill for no reason
The thought of becoming crazy and by crazy I mean full on psychotic
Good people being treated like they are monsters but they were once human….
Cooking or playing music for people who do not deserve it….
Someone drinking his wine without asking him first.
Fighting weak opponents only want to use guns to save themselves.
Going on new journeys with annoying people.
Mixed gender females
Guys trying to hit on him
TRAPS (transgender males)
Fears/phobias:
Demon dolls
Being alone
Having to replace his death over and over
Having to watch people eat in front of him
Having to think about dying without having a family for kids of his own…..
Being put back into the devil’s cage. (They cage that's not even the strongest demon or angel can break out of. God himself couldn't even break out of it and that Drove of him mad, that cage brings out the worst in people, reveals the fears to whoever stays in it.)
Being alone.
Seeing abuse or rape.
War or killing without reason.
Bullying.
People being burned.
Being laughed at.
Never being able to eat again.
Favourite colour:Red
Hobbies:Writing poetry
Fixing things
Fishing
Adventuring
Cooking
Reading
Taste in music:Classical
Heavy metal
Rock and roll
Country
Pop
{SKILLS}
Talents/skills:
Enhanced Strength
Enhanced Durability
Enhanced Agility
Enhanced Reflexes
Enhanced Speed
Enhanced Jumping
Enhanced Stamina
Enhanced Smelling
Enhanced Hearing
Enhanced Senses
Enhanced Healing
Enhanced Life Span
Sonic Howls
Sharp Claws
Sharp Teeth
Wolfwere Physiology
Werewolf Physiology
Canine Physiology
Ability to drive a car? Operate any other vehicles?:Yes and he is able to operate a motorcycle.
{EATING HABITS}
Omnivore/Carnivore/Herbivore (Vegetarian):Omnivore but more of a Carnivore when the moon is full
Favourite food(s):All types especially Asian food and American food plus Spanish dishes
Favourite drink(s):Fruit juices especially mango juice, Champagne Cola
Disliked food(s):Bananas,mayonnaise mixed ketchup or just plain mayo.
Disliked drink(s):Vodka,Pee
{HOUSE AND HOME}
Describe the character's house/home:He lives in a house that looks small on the outside but huge on the inside.
Do they share their home with anyone? Who?:Dai lives with his adopted kids (10 year old girl named Molly and a 7 year old boy named Max.)
A a blue horned marked liger named Lita.
A tribe of foxes (Diablo the flame fox, Fiona the Winter Fox, Suki the love fox, Jazz the Poison Fox, Ash the Autumn Fox, Dearest The Swamp Fox, Shiro the Seal fox, Nami The Flame and Ice Fox, Soul The Spirit Fox, Sky and Sora the demon flame twin foxes.)
Purple dark fox
Alphonse the Cyborg Dog
Blazer the space wolf
Significant/special belongings:The Demon Ring
A photo of his brother and sister
His guitar that he was given as a gift by a scientist but he customized it.

{CAREER}
Level of education:9th and 10 grade
Qualifications:Good cook
Travel through universes
Has done multiple jobs
Skilled Swordsman
he has worked for mercenary groups
Killed off close to 115 Shadows
Able to travel days or weeks without food.
Current job title and description:Adventurer
Travel
Open worker
Name of employer:Unknown
Theme song:
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MissNook

Well-Known Member
In my view it was already too long before. And I only mean too long to share that way. It's more like information you only need to keep about your sona. But for other people, you should try to summarize. The whole part about the combat is not readable (like the speed of the werewolf, why just not putting "speed (60 miles/h)") and there are really too much things everywhere.
It's also a little sad because maybe your character is cool and nice but I can't tell. There just too much information.
And a last thing, do you intend to keep your character that way? I mean people evolve all the time and I have the feeling that with such a specific description you will stuck the character in his story.
 

Daithi Aaron Radcliff

X rated and animated
In my view it was already too long before. And I only mean too long to share that way. It's more like information you only need to keep about your sona. But for other people, you should try to summarize. The whole part about the combat is not readable (like the speed of the werewolf, why just not putting "speed (60 miles/h)") and there are really too much things everywhere.
It's also a little sad because maybe your character is cool and nice but I can't tell. There just too much information.
And a last thing, do you intend to keep your character that way? I mean people evolve all the time and I have the feeling that with such a specific description you will stuck the character in his story.
You have a point. What should a change or give to him.
 

MissNook

Well-Known Member
You have a point. What should a change or give to him.
Maybe you can try this. Put in green whatever you feel is important in his description. Then, put in blue what you think is more important in the green words. Then put in orange what you think are the most important blue words. Try to put those information into your own layout. Show it to us.
 
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