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My First Attempt at NSFW

Cyberdragon

Cyberdragon

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I looking for a someone to critique my first attempt at NSFW (DM me). It's not much, but I want to know if it's a step in the right direction. All my stuff will be dragon related, either with characters from my world or random people from that world. I started with a basic ovi scene as I thought that would be simple. I'm not sure how to go about doing good sex scenes with pillow talk and whatnot yet. Feel free to give pointers.

EDIT: Reuploaded. www.furaffinity.net: Abigale's Laying Day by tdog442
 
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Yumi~

Yumi~

New Member
Seems pretty solid! Just one note, the ending, once the eggs are actually out, seems a bit rushed. Especially the instant orgasm. Nevertheless, a good beginning.
 
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