My first furry artwork, looking to do commissions :)

[ImaginedArt]

 

[TheCynicalViet]

Nice art, at least

 

[ImaginedArt]

Nice art, at least

What areas do you think I should improve on?

 

[Raever]

The sketchy style and anatomy look beautiful!
I can't offer critique for improvement since I don't have an eye for advanced techniques.
From a commissioner's viewpoint, I'd be happy to get work from you once I saw more of what you could do.
So by all means keep up the excellent work.

 

[ImaginedArt]

The sketchy style and anatomy look beautiful!
I can't offer critique for improvement since I don't have an eye for advanced techniques.
From a commissioner's viewpoint, I'd be happy to get work from you once I saw more of what you could do.
So by all means keep up the excellent work.

Thanks!

 

[Faustus]

Something feels slightly blurry; is this traditional art that's been photographed / scanned?
Might be worth checking the equipment if it is.

The artwork itself is lovely, although I'm not sure whether or not the moderators would consider bare bottoms to be NSFW, and NSFW images should usually be linked to by text rather than inserted into a post.

 

[ImaginedArt]

Something feels slightly blurry; is this traditional art that's been photographed / scanned?
Might be worth checking the equipment if it is.

The artwork itself is lovely, although I'm not sure whether or not the moderators would consider bare bottoms to be NSFW, and NSFW images should usually be linked to by text rather than inserted into a post.

Yeah will fosure tag nsfw next time kinda new to this. Thanks!

 

[IvorySkull]

I'm a big fan of sketchy styles.
Also, good anatomy, shapes and volumes. Nice stuff is nice!

Giving advices with a single artwork is tricky, the only thing I see that could use some improvement is clothes folds and shape, it doesn't look on the same level as the character.

Also I think you're at the right level to start experimenting with ambient lights and color contamination (i.e. in a green colored environment the light would bounce off green elements and reflect on the character).

Overall you seem to be on a very good skill level!

 

[Deleted member 162523]

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I'd like to see a cleaned version, unless concept scratch is your style.

 

[ImaginedArt]

I'm a big fan of sketchy styles.
Also, good anatomy, shapes and volumes. Nice stuff is nice!

Giving advices with a single artwork is tricky, the only thing I see that could use some improvement is clothes folds and shape, it doesn't look on the same level as the character.

Also I think you're at the right level to start experimenting with ambient lights and color contamination (i.e. in a green colored environment the light would bounce off green elements and reflect on the character).

Overall you seem to be on a very good skill level!

Thanks for the feedback , will definitely take the clothes advice in my next work.

 

[CreachureComforts]

Overall it looks pretty good, but the little bit of tail lineart between her arm and back seems a little misaligned with the rest of her tail. Kind of makes me think you're doing it all on one layer and going with your judgement, instead of planning a sketch out with overlapping lineart layers and letting the sketch help you out.

If you are doing it all on one layer... it'll work for a sketch, but you'll probably want to use more layers for final stuff. You could separate the tail and body lineart into their own layers, and use the tail layer to draw the whole lineart even if it overlaps the body, and then use that layer as a guide to draw the proper lineart without overlap.

You could probably do the same for her right hand, but it's mostly obscured past her wrist, so it's not really a huge deal but could still help for accuracy.