Sundown
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Yeah, I know it sucks. In my defense, my computer somehow lost the entire profile I wrote this morning, so this is the second draft. Critique, please?
Some parts of the profile are under construction.
Name: Sunny
Age: 18
Sex: Female
Species: Maine Coon/Linsang
Height: 5’3â€
Weight: 156
Appearance:
- Hair and fur:
She doesn’t have much of a ruff (to her dismay) so she makes up for it by keeping her wavy auburn hair cut long. With the recent fashion she’s cut some chin-length bangs, though she habitually pins it to the side with a barrette. Her fur is a bit shorter than is common for a Maine Coon, more velvety in texture and less wispy.
- Markings: Despite her somewhat unusual lineage, her coat color and markings aren’t that different from a normal Maine Coon. She has the ‘classic tabby’ markings, dark red on a light red background. The whirling markings are outlined in chocolate red. Her muzzle is white with a dark red nose, the white extending downward to form a white ‘bib’ on her collarbone. The tail has distinct bands that begin thin and cinnamon red in color, widening and darkening until they reach the last chocolate brown band and white tail tip. Her left arm has a white ‘mitten’ extending half way up the forearm; the right spreading up to the elbow. A white ‘sock’ covers her foot up to her ankle on her right leg, up to mid-thigh on her right. The bands on her legs reach almost to her knees.
General Reference, Marking Reference,
Marking Reference, General Color Reference,
Face/chest Markings Reference, Face/Chest Reference,
Tail Marking Reference, A linsang
- Eye color: Green
- Other features: Sunny has finer features and a lighter build than most Maine Coons, and is also quite a bit shorter. Proportionally, her tail is a bit long. Her ear tips are slightly rounded, and don’t have any hair tufts. Her legs are double jointed.
Behavior and Personality:
Because she’s the eldest of four siblings, Sunny tends to ‘mother’ any young children she meets. She actually gets along with them quite well, because she doesn’t patronize or undervalue children. Despite being the eldest, she actually looks and behaves quite young. Her ears are oversized proportionally, and her hands are also a little large. Her movements are best described as… unaware - unaware of herself as a woman and so her posture is more childlike. She holds eye contact a little longer than normal, making her seem socially naïve. She's extremely physically affectionate to people she knows, and has no qualms about holding her father's hand or carrying her younger siblings on her back.
Her dedication to her family is in conflict with her desire for a life of her own, and she never can reconcile the two drives. Sunny’s hunting instinct is very much intact, much to her humiliation. In high school her friends discovered they could distract her during class using laser pointers. Needless to say, she was not amused.
She’s easily addicted, and so avoids things like drugs, liquor, and cigarettes, knowing that she’d never stop if she started. There’s a pyro streak in her, though thankfully she chooses to channel it a vaguely constructive ways. She’s a terrible liar, but won’t admit she is even if the lie is discovered.
When most people need stress relief, they go to the spa, go get a massage, maybe take a vacation. Sunny sets things on fire. To be fair, it’s mostly junk - toys, furniture, cardboard boxes and such scavenged from dumpsters. She has a fascination with fire that prompts people not to keep candles lit when she’s over. Not that she’d set anyone or anything on fire (she only burns her own things, thank you very much) but she gets very distracted. If she doesn’t have the time or materials for a real bonfire, she’ll settle down over her stove burner and toast marshmallows, with every other mallow becoming a chunk of carbon. During the winter holidays she’s constantly wreathed in the scent of wood smoke.
Skills: Cooking, Cleaning, bandaging scraped knees, checking under the bed for the bogeyman, forgetting her homework…
Weaknesses: laser pens, easy distractibility, weak willpower (regarding self-control), bad liar
Likes: laser pens, bells, books, music, setting things on fire…
Dislikes: loud noises, people who talk too loudly, people who get into her personal space, bullies, tail-pulling, extremes in tempturature…
History:
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Aaand additional stuff if you want a "what's your blood type?" style bio
Clothing/Personal Style: Style? What Style? Oh, you mean which clothes she likes. Sunny has a penchant for button down shirts, t-shirts, cargo pants, and jeans. She has a rather masculine taste in jewelry, preferring leather, brass, and stainless steel in simple designs to the frothy confections of women’s jewelry. She especially likes leather cuffs, and has been known to wear collars from time to time.
Goal: Independence
Profession: Collage Student
Personal quote:
“Why does everyone hate Mondays so much? I can be optimistic on a Monday, but a Tuesday? By then my hopes have been dashed and yet the rest of the week stretches before me.†(Best said in a melodramatic voice.)
Theme song:
Sunny Came Home – Shawn Colvin
Hurry Sundown – The Outlaws
Birthdate: July 13, 1993
Star sign: Cancer
Favorite food: Chicken and Sausage Jambalaya
Favorite drink: Tea, anything sweet
Favorite location:
Favorite weather: Rainy, believe it or not. So long as she has an umbrella. Drying out fur is a pain!
Favorite color: Blue
Least liked food: overly spicy foods
Least liked drink: any kind of alcohol
Least liked location: cold places
Least liked weather: hot and humid
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Favorite person:
Least liked person:
Friends:
Relations: Ana and Carrie (sisters), Russ (brother), Jake (Dad), and Sandy (mother)
Enemies: none
Significant other: none
Orientation:
Some parts of the profile are under construction.
Name: Sunny
Age: 18
Sex: Female
Species: Maine Coon/Linsang
Height: 5’3â€
Weight: 156
Appearance:
- Hair and fur:
She doesn’t have much of a ruff (to her dismay) so she makes up for it by keeping her wavy auburn hair cut long. With the recent fashion she’s cut some chin-length bangs, though she habitually pins it to the side with a barrette. Her fur is a bit shorter than is common for a Maine Coon, more velvety in texture and less wispy.
- Markings: Despite her somewhat unusual lineage, her coat color and markings aren’t that different from a normal Maine Coon. She has the ‘classic tabby’ markings, dark red on a light red background. The whirling markings are outlined in chocolate red. Her muzzle is white with a dark red nose, the white extending downward to form a white ‘bib’ on her collarbone. The tail has distinct bands that begin thin and cinnamon red in color, widening and darkening until they reach the last chocolate brown band and white tail tip. Her left arm has a white ‘mitten’ extending half way up the forearm; the right spreading up to the elbow. A white ‘sock’ covers her foot up to her ankle on her right leg, up to mid-thigh on her right. The bands on her legs reach almost to her knees.
General Reference, Marking Reference,
Marking Reference, General Color Reference,
Face/chest Markings Reference, Face/Chest Reference,
Tail Marking Reference, A linsang
- Eye color: Green
- Other features: Sunny has finer features and a lighter build than most Maine Coons, and is also quite a bit shorter. Proportionally, her tail is a bit long. Her ear tips are slightly rounded, and don’t have any hair tufts. Her legs are double jointed.
Behavior and Personality:
Because she’s the eldest of four siblings, Sunny tends to ‘mother’ any young children she meets. She actually gets along with them quite well, because she doesn’t patronize or undervalue children. Despite being the eldest, she actually looks and behaves quite young. Her ears are oversized proportionally, and her hands are also a little large. Her movements are best described as… unaware - unaware of herself as a woman and so her posture is more childlike. She holds eye contact a little longer than normal, making her seem socially naïve. She's extremely physically affectionate to people she knows, and has no qualms about holding her father's hand or carrying her younger siblings on her back.
Her dedication to her family is in conflict with her desire for a life of her own, and she never can reconcile the two drives. Sunny’s hunting instinct is very much intact, much to her humiliation. In high school her friends discovered they could distract her during class using laser pointers. Needless to say, she was not amused.
She’s easily addicted, and so avoids things like drugs, liquor, and cigarettes, knowing that she’d never stop if she started. There’s a pyro streak in her, though thankfully she chooses to channel it a vaguely constructive ways. She’s a terrible liar, but won’t admit she is even if the lie is discovered.
When most people need stress relief, they go to the spa, go get a massage, maybe take a vacation. Sunny sets things on fire. To be fair, it’s mostly junk - toys, furniture, cardboard boxes and such scavenged from dumpsters. She has a fascination with fire that prompts people not to keep candles lit when she’s over. Not that she’d set anyone or anything on fire (she only burns her own things, thank you very much) but she gets very distracted. If she doesn’t have the time or materials for a real bonfire, she’ll settle down over her stove burner and toast marshmallows, with every other mallow becoming a chunk of carbon. During the winter holidays she’s constantly wreathed in the scent of wood smoke.
Skills: Cooking, Cleaning, bandaging scraped knees, checking under the bed for the bogeyman, forgetting her homework…
Weaknesses: laser pens, easy distractibility, weak willpower (regarding self-control), bad liar
Likes: laser pens, bells, books, music, setting things on fire…
Dislikes: loud noises, people who talk too loudly, people who get into her personal space, bullies, tail-pulling, extremes in tempturature…
History:
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Aaand additional stuff if you want a "what's your blood type?" style bio
Clothing/Personal Style: Style? What Style? Oh, you mean which clothes she likes. Sunny has a penchant for button down shirts, t-shirts, cargo pants, and jeans. She has a rather masculine taste in jewelry, preferring leather, brass, and stainless steel in simple designs to the frothy confections of women’s jewelry. She especially likes leather cuffs, and has been known to wear collars from time to time.
Goal: Independence
Profession: Collage Student
Personal quote:
“Why does everyone hate Mondays so much? I can be optimistic on a Monday, but a Tuesday? By then my hopes have been dashed and yet the rest of the week stretches before me.†(Best said in a melodramatic voice.)
Theme song:
Sunny Came Home – Shawn Colvin
Hurry Sundown – The Outlaws
Birthdate: July 13, 1993
Star sign: Cancer
Favorite food: Chicken and Sausage Jambalaya
Favorite drink: Tea, anything sweet
Favorite location:
Favorite weather: Rainy, believe it or not. So long as she has an umbrella. Drying out fur is a pain!
Favorite color: Blue
Least liked food: overly spicy foods
Least liked drink: any kind of alcohol
Least liked location: cold places
Least liked weather: hot and humid
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Favorite person:
Least liked person:
Friends:
Relations: Ana and Carrie (sisters), Russ (brother), Jake (Dad), and Sandy (mother)
Enemies: none
Significant other: none
Orientation:
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