Need Critique

[ryulabo]

Hello there,
Recently I've made this christmas art and after uploading it and checks back to FA in the next day,my exposure ego starts to haunt me :shock:
I really want to get rid of the exposure problem but it keeps haunting me T_T

I need to join this site to critique my work because...I din't have any place to critique a furry art.
Anyway here's my recent christmas art:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15296136/

and my other artwork
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15240178/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14395026/
(nsfw)
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14394992/

My main concern when making art is:
-Making a kemono style
-Drawing a muscular art
-Rendering
-Background

I hope I would get a good feedback.

 

[mapdark]

Could you specify in which area you would like a critique. Do you want a critique on the anatomy , the lighting , the use of colour or a general critique touching all those subjects?

 

[ryulabo]

I want a critique on the anatomy and the use of the color.
I've listed down my concern there.

 

[Maugryph]

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14395026/ is a solid picture, with good pose, shading and anatomy. The only thing I do not understand is the while stoke you put across his hair.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15240178/ you did great work with the pants but the anatomy in the arms is very strange. The head also doesn't feel attached to his body.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15296136/ Please don't resort to pillow shading. The first picture demonstrates that you understand how to set up a light source. Always do that. The six pack also feels a little flat.

 

[ryulabo]

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14395026/ is a solid picture, with good pose, shading and anatomy. The only thing I do not understand is the while stoke you put across his hair.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15240178/ you did great work with the pants but the anatomy in the arms is very strange. The head also doesn't feel attached to his body.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/15296136/ Please don't resort to pillow shading. The first picture demonstrates that you understand how to set up a light source. Always do that. The six pack also feels a little flat.

For the 3rd pic, I wanted to face the light source facing to the character.Is that a good thing ?
Had trouble with the arm muscle since I can't tell what flex and what's not especially in some other muscle area.