New icon opinions wanted

[Arlethallan]

Hey y'all i made a new icon for myself,and i really like it,but it still looks kind of wonky, so could y'all telling if it looks weird to y'all, cus i just can figure out why it looks off.

The icon in question:

 

[cyborg.franky38]

I think it looks adorable and quirky. I think it fits well. :3

 

[Scales42]

I like the facial expression! I dont think there is anything wrong with it

 

[Arlethallan]

Thank you, if y'all think it's alright, maybe I'm just being way to self critical, which wouldn't be new I suppose

 

[Scales42]

Thank you, if y'all think it's alright, maybe I'm just being way to self critical, which wouldn't be new I suppose

Being self critical is normal I suppose, otherwise we wouldnt make any progress right?

 

[cyborg.franky38]

Thank you, if y'all think it's alright, maybe I'm just being way to self critical, which wouldn't be new I suppose

Like Scales42 said, it is completely normal to be self-critical, but it does look awesome. :3

 

[Arlethallan]

true, thanks y'all

 

[cyborg.franky38]

You are very welcome. :3

 

[drawain]

Hey, your icon did turn out very pretty and cute! And it took me a moment, but I figured out what makes it look off:

The teeth and tongue are aligned with the mouth, but it's impossible for them to be placed like that in the skull.

I think that's it! The rest looks perfectly fine to me! :3 I like the gradients and colors.

 

[Arlethallan]

Hey, your icon did turn out very pretty and cute! And it took me a moment, but I figured out what makes it look off:

The teeth and tongue are aligned with the mouth, but it's impossible for them to be placed like that in the skull.

I think that's it! The rest looks perfectly fine to me! :3 I like the gradients and colors.

Good point! so i think i fixed the problem? I also added darker lines separating the hair and the face cus the were blending from far away and made it seem like a weird head shape.

Fixed version

 

[kidchameleon]

Looks really great I think the only "off" thing for me is the fact that it seems a bit 'weighted' to the right, and might look better if your face was slightly more centered... but that's probably more a matter of personal taste than anything actually wrong with it. Looks awesome regardless.

 

[Arlethallan]

Looks really great I think the only "off" thing for me is the fact that it seems a bit 'weighted' to the right, and might look better if your face was slightly more centered... but that's probably more a matter of personal taste than anything actually wrong with it. Looks awesome regardless.

Thx and yeah I can kind of see what you mean, the eyes and nose are much more to the right than the mouth.