PostalRoo said:Well this is just awesome. I could really use one of these, as I suck at proportions. My most recent work:
Thanks in advance, blotch![]()
PostalRoo said:Well, I was prefering to look at it from a more human proportion and focus more on the chest and arms, as that is where I have the greater difficulty. However, I was very unspecific in that respect so I won't ask anything extra.
Thank you for the quick feedback. I didn't realize that the legs were THAT wide nor the tail that big on a kangaroo.
SpiritCreations said:Anyways, I'm needing help on:
-Her muzzle (in relation to the stuff in front of it... :3) and facial view and where it all goes. She's an arctic fox.
-His muzzle (also in relation to the stuff in front of it.. you'll know what I mean) and facial view and stuff. He's a german shepherd.
- Her left foot angle and his left hand angle.
- I forgot to add in her right leg before I uploaded this. I'll get that later but if you have any suggestions go ahead and put it in.
If you see anything else off, feel free to redline it but the above are my main concerns.
LoboRoo said:I draw more toony than anything, but since I'm cursing the way I draw cats, and can't seem to figure this out.
PostalRoo said:Wow... thanks blotch. Where, by chance, do you get your stock photos to referrence off of by the way?
blotch said:SpiritCreations said:Anyways, I'm needing help on:
-Her muzzle (in relation to the stuff in front of it... :3) and facial view and where it all goes. She's an arctic fox.
-His muzzle (also in relation to the stuff in front of it.. you'll know what I mean) and facial view and stuff. He's a german shepherd.
- Her left foot angle and his left hand angle.
- I forgot to add in her right leg before I uploaded this. I'll get that later but if you have any suggestions go ahead and put it in.
If you see anything else off, feel free to redline it but the above are my main concerns.
Hullo! Good to see you making art again!
That pose is indeed a very hard one to pull off, and show "stuff" as well as expression. I think you did a great job!
I redlined what you mentioned above, as well as a couple little things.
It's attached in a very NOT WORK SAFE attachment. ;]
The GSD's head looked very small, especially for a breed that is all head and ears. Also, the slope of the back looks a little off, and his neck too craned. With that kind of strain, who could be enjoying their end, eh?
On the artic fox, her upper arm looked a little short which made her forearm look very long.
I guess everything is pretty straightforward.. If there's anything else, you know how to reach me!
I look forward to seeing the final version!
Cheers,
-Blotch
EDIT: Resurrecting this Thread, as of 3/18/07!
If you have anything you'd like help with, please feel free to drop a reply here!
Cheers,
-Blotch
( FA : http://www.furaffinity.net/user/blotch )
Wolf E. Urameshi said:Um... I'd like to request redlines on these, please: *rhyme not intentional XD*
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/371383/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/372485/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/374002/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/395424/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/395428/
Thanks! I appreciate it!
Wolf E. Urameshi said:Ah, I see. Thank you, but may you please enlighten me more on these matters, such as gesture drawing, for example? ^_^;;
Wolf E. Urameshi said:Ah, I see. Apologies for my utter stupidity in not seeing it.![]()
Lyenuv said:I'd love a redline or some constructive critique on this picture, if you're still offering them. =3
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/456872/ (SFW)
Thank you so much!
Doggieo said:Ok heres something i made yesterday. Any tips?http://www.furaffinity.net/view/456629/