• Fur Affinity Forums are governed by Fur Affinity's Rules and Policies. Links and additional information can be accessed in the Site Information Forum.
When I was 12 I drew a comic in school, I had recently found out what a furry was and was already really into Sonic the hedgehog so I started designing my own characters. These characters have stuck with me ever since though they have undergone a few changes, most noteably they aren't sonic OCs anymore. It's cringey to look back at but that's what everyone does when they look back at their childhood.

I kept saying I would remake this comic one day but never felt like I was skilled enough to do it justice. After talking with some friends I've been convinced now is the time to remake the comic. I will be making some changes so the story flows better as well as updating characters, explaining things further, adding more pages and attempting to remove some of the cringe.

I've started sketching out the comic and wanted a place where I could use as a way of documenting the process, then I saw there was a section for comics on the forum.

I will include the original comic as well as each page I remake.

Original Comic can be seen here:
There's too many files to put into one post so I will include the rest in another post below.
591011_DerpyDooReviews_originall_cbg_comic_0001.jpg

591017_DerpyDooReviews_originall_cbg_comic_0002.jpg

591018_DerpyDooReviews_originall_cbg_comic_0003.jpg

591019_DerpyDooReviews_originall_cbg_comic_0004.jpg

591020_DerpyDooReviews_originall_cbg_comic_0005.jpg

591021_DerpyDooReviews_originall_cbg_comic_0006.jpg

591022_DerpyDooReviews_originall_cbg_comic_0007.jpg
591023_DerpyDooReviews_originall_cbg_comic_0008.jpg

591024_DerpyDooReviews_originall_cbg_comic_0009.jpg

591025_DerpyDooReviews_originall_cbg_comic_0010.jpg
 
Last edited:
The rest of the pages:
591026_DerpyDooReviews_originall_cbg_comic_0011.jpg

591027_DerpyDooReviews_originall_cbg_comic_0012.jpg

591028_DerpyDooReviews_originall_cbg_comic_0013.jpg

From here I will be attempting to recreate the comic but try to make it cleaner and easier to read. The villain has been redesigned to be a little less silly looking and more of a threat.
Draco Sketch sheet smaller.png

Compared to the original:
591018_DerpyDooReviews_originall_cbg_comic_0003.jpg

And I have started sketching the first page. Nothing here is final just a rough sketch:
CBG Comic remastered 2021 sketch super smaller.png

Compared to the original:
591019_DerpyDooReviews_originall_cbg_comic_0004.jpg
 
Last edited:
Slight update! Sketch of page 2 and a sketch of the character introduction for Trixy. I kept some of the cringey comments from child me but tried to iron out most of them. The "coolness rating" had to stay, it was such a big part if this weird universe I was designing. Though maybe they need updating...

Trixy info smaller.jpg
page 2 smaller.jpg
 

Adrian Gordon

Active Member
i like sonic, i mean just look at my undertale avatar, so i'm interested in seeing where this goes.
 

Kuroserama

Just a fox.
Wow, how long between your 12 year old self and now? I mean... your drawing skills and narrative ability at 12 is pretty impressive. It's really fun to see the Then and Now, though. I feel you've done a great job keeping the essence of what you had but putting some intensely refining goggles on. I cannot wait to see more.

It makes me want to redo my childhood pieces but I am slightly concerned they'd look almost identical.. *laughs nervously*
 
Top