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Some feedback for my future adult work.

Glitter_Daddy

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I have some questions about my first adult comic. The main question is what do you guys think of the art style? Also I know it still early but without text is the pages readable, can you guys some what understand what's going on? Thanks for your time.
 

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PinchRib

*chuckles* i'm in danger.
CUTE AF, NO NOTES

whatever needs improving, you probably already know -- just slow down w/ your panels, tighten the shape referencing on your anatomy so you don't get 'face skew' (keep a circle / block / wedge when sketching to remind you what shape her skull is and how it will turn).

it's a cute cartoon style in a comprehensive line weight; you have all my support.
 
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