I have some questions about my first adult comic. The main question is what do you guys think of the art style? Also I know it still early but without text is the pages readable, can you guys some what understand what's going on? Thanks for your time.
whatever needs improving, you probably already know -- just slow down w/ your panels, tighten the shape referencing on your anatomy so you don't get 'face skew' (keep a circle / block / wedge when sketching to remind you what shape her skull is and how it will turn).
it's a cute cartoon style in a comprehensive line weight; you have all my support.