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I've got this story called Rodent Arms. I have the whole thing written and even some art drawn by my friend. It's a steampunk/fantasy story with with various mammals, mostly rodents and other smaller creatures. Here is a 10-page preview that should give you all a general idea of the conflict. My goal is to have it published in the spring, when the illustrations should be complete (my friend also has college to balance). Any feedback would be appreciated.

Some art of the characters can be found on my DeviantArt (the Fremont on the sketch dump is outdated, the more recent one is what he will look like in the illustration).