Tf short story- Feedback appreciated

[Chad Firepaws]

Hey everyone, I just completed my latest work in the fine field of tf literature, a Jaguar tf called "Seeing Spots" Seeing Spots (Story in description) - Jaguar tf Commissi... by SinglePringle56 -- Fur Affinity [dot] net Critiques/ reviews would be greatly appreciated for anyone into tf stories.

 

[Phischermen]

I liked it. The tf sequence had just the right amount of detail in it. That ending bit about Arthur fighting to save an endangered species was really cheeky! I'm hoping Mr. Gould gets his comeupance; he's a real jerk! I am curious to know more about Mr. Gould and his compatriots; specifically why do they want to change people into animals.

 

[Chad Firepaws]

I liked it. The tf sequence had just the right amount of detail in it. That ending bit about Arthur fighting to save an endangered species was really cheeky! I'm hoping Mr. Gould gets his comeupance; he's a real jerk! I am curious to know more about Mr. Gould and his compatriots; specifically why do they want to change people into animals.

Thanks for replying! I was getting lonely by myself ;w; Well I have a whole series about it on my FA, here's the linky if you want more https://www.furaffinity.net/gallery/singlepringle56/folder/919389/WildWorld-Stories

I'm actually still writing the final part of it lol, it's turned out to be a lot bigger than I first imagined it to be. Hopefully those'll provide more answers cause I won't spoil anything!